Reviews for Forfeit
myshiro chapter 20 . 5/1
Awesome stories. Though in the middle i really want to kill you for hurting baby continue writingn. I cant stop crying. A good job and a well done. Please write more awesome stories.
Ageha Yume chapter 13 . 5/27/2016
This is one of the few stories that made me cry so much! I swear, the tears just won't stop! (﹏)
Aika-chan chapter 20 . 5/24/2016
Beautiful! absolutely beautiful...
YourAngstReader chapter 19 . 2/3/2016
wahhh.. your story made me cry for two days since i read it. i love your story..﹏ ﹏ #Can'tCryHardEnough.
keep up the good work. ω chapter 20 . 1/23/2016
I love it! It was such an awesome story!
Guest chapter 3 . 12/8/2015
ryoma kick his ass
also what the hell nanjirou
Saniwa chapter 20 . 11/13/2015
Ugh, I hate you for writing the best angsty OT5 fic. I think my tears are all dried up. So yeah, thank you for the happy ending! And For the wonderful piece.

Although, will you ever be continuing will you love me tomorrow?
RedCeleste chapter 20 . 9/2/2015
OMG soo for some stupid reason the PM'ing is down on the site. In short my thoughts on this story is that it was heartwrenching-ly ( idk if that is even a word) epic. I read this in one go and never wanted to stop. Frowned at any disturbances and totally absorbed myself in this flic.
Nothing against other PoT writers but I will say that this is the BEST PoT flic I have ever read. I really do hope you still write. Hopefully I will be able to shoot you a PM ( if you do not mind) and chat with you.
This story in and of itself held so much emotion and was played beautifully. The change in the PoV's though they were quick and never specified who was speaking it was very easy to tell. To be honest I have never read a writing like this. I became so attached to the story and the characters that I did not want it to end.
I'd love to see a continuation of this. One perhaps on the relationship between Ryoma and Ryoga ( as brothers like brother bonding). I'd like to see how they all work together and if Ryoma has any side effects from the bullet ( occasional searing headaches) or if he takes anything.
Theres so much more I'd love to know about this AU( is this classified as an AU?) story and setting. Thanks so much for sharing your writing with us. I truly appreciate it!
Guest chapter 20 . 7/28/2015
Dream219 chapter 17 . 5/23/2015
I just love the part after the call button was pressed since almost everyone was in panic mode and was screaming. Keep up the good work!
FujiRyo1827 chapter 16 . 1/19/2015
You know...I hate you...You made me cry...You made me cry my heart out you idjit!

Good work *sighs*
Yuuki-chan24 chapter 20 . 12/23/2014
This is a very amazing story. I loved every moment of it. I felt really emotional while reading this.
Keep up the Good work!
SmileForMe15 chapter 2 . 9/2/2014
I love this story. I've re read it a ton of times.
Guest chapter 20 . 7/28/2014
It was so sweet!

FYI: magna cum laude means "with great praise" in Latin. There are a few awards above that: the highest is "summa cum laude"-with highest praise. Below that is "maxime cum laude"-with greatest praise-but "summa cum laude" is very rare and honored. The lowest is "cum laude"-with praise.

You might want to change it to "summa cum laude" just to prove Ryoma's dedication and talent.

Good ending.
Puppiesssss chapter 20 . 6/12/2014
oh my god please kill me. you had me in tears for like forever! i cried through the whole fic damn it! danm you and love you and congrazzz for making my life a living heaven! i think i have to be a beggar on the streets because i used up all my money for tissues! damn how did you weave such a wonderful story full of angst!? this should be made into a freaking movie! pleaseee send this to IMDB or hollywoods or whatever! if they don't recognize your talents and this wonderful story Tony Starks dear please send your whatever many models of iron man to crush their base!
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