|Reviews for Hide and Seek|
| ice around the moon chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
*Tears* Makin' me cry! Lol, when I read this I forgot to read the little warning you had at the top and when I was reading this I was like, 'wow this reminds me of hide and seek' by Imogen Heap!'
Then I looked back up to the warning and I was like oh...sweet! Haha, but yeah the story was really really good even though it had a sad ending.
It was a really beautiful story:P
| Greengirl011 chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
i loved this story even if it had a sad ending
| Emily Burton chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
I have 1 thing to say, OMG! That story was soo sad, i was almost crying. (I Love Bumblebee btw) You are a really good writer.
Keep up the good work!
| ninja-pirate-alchemist chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
*teary eyed* love it TwT it would be great to have a sequel of some kind... :3
| Trapped in Reality chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
How sad... I was near the verge of tears.
| Psychic-Ghost chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
*now is sad and wants to cry*
That was sad.
*favorites to torment self with later*
| Cool Jay chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Wahahahahah... *sniff* *sob*
That was so sahaahahaad...
My God, the story was beautifully well falling out of eyes*
I feel so sorry for Bumble. he won't be able to see her again.
I know the song Hde and Seek. It's really sad, and choosing this as the theme of the story is perfect.
Long live Rayne!
| Failing in General chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
aww *sniff* that was the saddest story i ever read. TT you should make a sequal, like if she didn't die. written really well. congrates on a great story!
| SkyHighFan chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
What happened to her
| Digger2213 chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
*Starts bawling*That was beautiful. Sad...but beautiful. Nice work though!
| Paleodex chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
*sob* the cute, tragic love stories always get me!
| SheWasFlying chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
Awesome story. I got all teary eyed at the end! *wipes eyes with tissue paper*
Two thumbs up!
| D. Mischief chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
aww my eyes had tears forming. Poor bee but so mature at the same time.
| Elita One chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
soo cute our little bee is growing up
the ending was sad i was almost in tears poor bee
| xXsomeoneelseXx chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
So sad... but beautifully written!