Reviews for Hide and Seek
ice around the moon chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
*Tears* Makin' me cry! Lol, when I read this I forgot to read the little warning you had at the top and when I was reading this I was like, 'wow this reminds me of hide and seek' by Imogen Heap!'

Then I looked back up to the warning and I was like oh...sweet! Haha, but yeah the story was really really good even though it had a sad ending.

It was a really beautiful story:P
Greengirl011 chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
i loved this story even if it had a sad ending
Emily Burton chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
I have 1 thing to say, OMG! That story was soo sad, i was almost crying. (I Love Bumblebee btw) You are a really good writer.

Keep up the good work!

Emily :)
ninja-pirate-alchemist chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
*teary eyed* love it TwT it would be great to have a sequel of some kind... :3
Trapped in Reality chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
How sad... I was near the verge of tears.
Psychic-Ghost chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
*now is sad and wants to cry*

That was sad.

*favorites to torment self with later*
Cool Jay chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Wahahahahah... *sniff* *sob*

That was so sahaahahaad...

My God, the story was beautifully well falling out of eyes*

I feel so sorry for Bumble. he won't be able to see her again.

I know the song Hde and Seek. It's really sad, and choosing this as the theme of the story is perfect.

Long live Rayne!
Failing in General chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
aww *sniff* that was the saddest story i ever read. TT you should make a sequal, like if she didn't die. written really well. congrates on a great story!
SkyHighFan chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
What happened to her
Digger2213 chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
*Starts bawling*That was beautiful. Sad...but beautiful. Nice work though!
Paleodex chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
*sob* the cute, tragic love stories always get me!
SheWasFlying chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
Awesome story. I got all teary eyed at the end! *wipes eyes with tissue paper*

Two thumbs up!
D. Mischief chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
aww my eyes had tears forming. Poor bee but so mature at the same time.
Elita One chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
soo cute our little bee is growing up

the ending was sad i was almost in tears poor bee
xXsomeoneelseXx chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
So sad... but beautifully written!