|Reviews for Hozho|
| DreamShadows chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
That was a beautiful ending to an absolutely amazing story! This is one of the few stories that I actually review... That I take the time to leave a few words... Hope that tells you it's really good, and you're an awesome writer.
Onward with the review... :P
The emotion and the genuine joy you displayed in this chapter with Deb made me smile... And Nathan was pretty cool, though at first I have to admit you had me holding my breath that Betzgai had come back...
I liked the brotherly love and snark in this chapter, so realistic, I really couldn't tell the difference between your's and the shows...
All in all, wonderful stuff!
Take care, and I can't wait to read your next epic...
| friendly chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
that was a good story.. nice job..
| supernaturalsammy67 chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
Its finally over...im so gonna miss you girl x
Im thankful to jenilee too for helping you to post your work x because your work has truly made an impact and difference in my life and has had a very large effect on that your the person id like to be x
in an inspirational admirinf kind of way x
I hope you know i will always have your back hun, no matter what story you write o even if you dont, i hope to keep in contact with you maybe through messages or emails lol because i have never enjoyed a story as much as yous and i dont want to lose that x i want to keep contact and hope that your doing okay, and taking care even when your not writing at the present time lol x
OMG i cant wait to start digging into your next long story, this one has been an unforgetable experience that i cherish x
your story has made me laugh and made me cry and made me smile and has been an area that i escaped to when life got a lil too much bitchy, this story has inspired me and you all by yourself so you need a HUGE thankyou! and great praise for getting me interested into so many beliefs and cultures that your story has explored x
basically thankyou for joining this site and for sharing your talent with everyone here, thank you greatly! just by reading your work i feel closer to you hun and have this overwhelming feling of loss now its over, and need to make sure your doing ok now and again x
thanksyou for even starting writing hun, you have an unabashed talent so great to be shared, thankyou for letting me have the honur and experience in my life ot have shared this story with you x
youve worked so hard and done so well in the characyters that i wish this story was the real Supernatural because you have done it so much more brillient then the tv producers ever could explore the brothers and the elements x
thank you greatky from the bottom of my heart as someone who has read this story and loved it from the very first words x
your work is like digging into your favourate book on a cold day or like a hobby, somehting close and deeply and passionatly treasured that is close to the heart x
thank you x with a million smiles to match x
| neonchica chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
Terrific work! Loved it, and sorry to see it end. Can't wait for next story - I'm sure it will be equally wonderful.
| SeaGlassGreen chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
Congratulations on this excellent story. You took your time and created something worth reading and re-reading. I especially liked your supporting characters, Deb in particular; you really brought her to life. I look forward to your future works.
| calcium77 chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
Well, it is over :-( That is very sad. I truly loved your story. You did a great job with:
- keeping it exciting
- actiony but not too violent
- having just the right amount of limp Sam
- great brotherly relationship
- interesting other characters
I loved it all, but my favorite part was the time when Sam was kidnapped by the skinwalker. I read those chapters over a few times actually :-)
I looked forward to new chapters and was always super excited when I got one of those lovely emails announcing that there was one waiting for me :-)
I will keep an eye out for new stories from you for sure. You should definitely keep writing more...lots lots more.
Thanks for putting in so much work and sharing it with everyone! I guess all the hours at your computer are not wasted if so many people can enjoy what you create?
| Carol chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
I am sad that this story is at an end- I have loved reading it and can hardly wait for the next one.
When the 2 Supernatural books came out- being a totally obsessed fan- I had read them immediately. I have to tell you that they were nothing like the story you have completed. I was disappointed in the books but Hozho had me hooked from the first chapter. The characterization, emotion, drama and action had me checking for updates 2 and 3 times a day.
I admire the talent and skill that went into this tale, ( I wish I was a fraction as talented) and hope that you keep writing for my enjoyment, but mainly for your enjoyment.
| Vanessa Sgroi chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
Fabulous wrap up, Vic. Just fabulous. I'm sorry to see this one go. I loved reading every minute of it. I can't wait to see more from you!
| Surplus Imagination chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
You didn't say 'the end' and you didn't mark the story complete. Now you have to add a bit more.
Nice not-really (see above) ending. I liked that Nathan showed up. I suppose he was the deep voice in the last chapter. So much for my wanting to complicate things with John coming.
I hope you have some male brownies to celebrate the finish. Personally, I like to add pecans & chocolate chips to the Ghiradelli mix. Don't get stingy with the extras now.
| Lee chapter 17 . 1/9/2008
This story rocked! What with the plot devices, developed characters, and kick-ass action scenes. Rock on man.
| maxandkiz chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
Wonderful ending! Loved Deb's snack for the boys! LOL! Actually I loved the whole story. I'm gonna miss reading it. Can't wait for your new one.
| Colby's girl chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
Boohoo...I'll miss this story so much! Congratulations on a wonderful story. As a reader I could tell that the subject must be close to your heart because it was well...full of heart. The story was well thought out, the action was amazing and the emotions captured in your words were beautiful. You managed to present an acutate portrayal of two characters already defined by someone else as well as introduce a wealth of characters all your own. Kudos to you and I can't wait to read more of your writing.
| iNsAnE nO bAkA chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
I know who the "deep voice" is...Nathan! *glee* That was just an absolute gem of a story...angsty almost-broken-but-fixed-in-the-end goodness. *hearts* Thanks so much for sharing this with us!
| Thorny Hedge chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
*sigh* This was a quintessential SPN episode Kripke should totally hire you. I loved every second of it, and I look forward to your next tale.
| Angela-Marie chapter 18 . 1/9/2008
Absolutely wonderful. And a positively beautiful ending. Thank you so much for sharing this story. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter.