Reviews for Orochimaru's Burdened Love
Noob4Life chapter 9 . 8/21/2013
Good job so far. It's hard to find a good Orochimaru fics. Keep it up!
Banesraver666 chapter 5 . 5/28/2013
Sorry to say this but, you made your character look like a slut. I like the story though.
oroby chapter 2 . 5/28/2013
Wow perfect man!
KaizoRulzs226 chapter 9 . 5/18/2010
I can't really criticise it was great. The plot is fantastic and I only found 1 error in regards to spelling but now I can't remember where it was. Please keep up the good work. X
keyaranic chapter 9 . 7/7/2009
This story is beautiful, full of romance, and ever so sexy! I loved it.

Orochimaru is my favorite, so i was amazed to find shuch a excellent story about him. I cant wait to read more of this awesome story!

(hope you do write more)
Mizuru007 chapter 9 . 4/5/2009
F why did you stop!

I'm grateful to you for writing this since OroxOC fics are SUPER RARE online... .

Thanks and KEEP. WRITING.
Alucard's Annoying Friend chapter 9 . 1/10/2009
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TheForgottenSheikah chapter 9 . 12/25/2008
yay, ur back :D sorry i didnt realize earlier. im slow xD
JigokuShoujosRevenge chapter 9 . 11/18/2008
How awesome. Kanna got all hot and bothered, but didn't get any. She must feel great.
Taima chapter 8 . 10/22/2008
Good chapter and all, but... There were quite a few grammar mistakes that I would like you to notice. The plot of the chapter, I guess, was amazing and all, but those mistakes slightly scared me... And they made the chapter of less value(My opinion only, though, so if you don't want to, don't take it to heart). Loved the chapter, though, keep it coming.
bytchi-chan chapter 8 . 10/21/2008
NO!
CountUchiha chapter 7 . 5/12/2008
PLZ continue on your story. on ly personal opinion I do think that less swearing would make the story better - well this is just an opinion but If it's part of Kana's nature then I guess I can do nothing but give opinions. Oh and if you ever get stuck on the story you are welcomed to ask me/ msg me for ideas - cheers
TheForgottenSheikah chapter 7 . 3/29/2008
YAY U FINALLY UPDATED! I still wanna hang Kabuto...
Darknesslover15 chapter 7 . 3/29/2008
Aw poor Kabuto...

Okay maybe he shouldn't die...I changed my mind.

He doesn't seem that bad, lolz.

But then again I don't have a clue.

But whatever.

Update soon. I love your story.

-Darknesslover-
Darknesslover15 chapter 6 . 3/24/2008
Orochimaru is my second favorite character.

Anyways Love ur story...

Its kool.

And I wnt to knw wht happens next so...

Update soon. And kill Kabuto. Hes such a jerk..Haha.

-Darknesslover15-
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