|Reviews for Gone West and Over|
| guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Lol that was so funny i can't stop laughing goku's so cute :)
| Not All Scars Show chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
LOVED IT:) It was great, loved when Hakkai told Gojyo off. :)
| Freaking Cage chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Oh my Lord, this was hilarious! I haven't technically read the 'Journey' Saga yet (still on Goku) but smokey I can't wait to read it now! I really do hope you suddenly get the urge to write Saiyuki again-you're really good at it.
But a quick grammar correction:
than: comparison, ex, "My head is bigger than yours."
then: cause and effect, ex, "If its cut in half, then it will be smaller."
And I'm glad you added the 'touch of death' bit. Seems a bit cruel for a monk to abort a baby when everything could have turned out fine. :(
Anyway, great job!
| satoru-13 chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
xD I was wondering why it had "Daddy Sanzo and Mummy Hakkai" at the front...I thought "Mummy Sanzo and Zookeeper Hakkai" was more accurate...xD
| silver-eyed chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
haha, wow, that was a real good one! hahha, i would have laughed so hard and kept on laughing longer than gojyo! lol, love it!
| shannny2k chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
OMG this was FANTASTIC!
I loved the plot and I really liked the fact that Hakkai gets preggers! Hakkai is my absolute favorite characters of ALL TIME!
Absolutely loved the end of the story as well, Hakkai saying "Shut up and die!" is a great image in my head. It's also slightly odd because I pictured the house that they're at to be my grandma's house. And in my mind they're puking into the flowers... only slightly odd, and much more entertaining :P
This was great, please write another one-shot like this!
| jarm chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Very very good.
| nimblnymph chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
The whole thing was brilliant, as is expected from you. I ADORE Journey West, which you damn well know.
While everything was excellent and kept with BOTH stories wonderfully, my favorite part came at the end. Those has two lines had me howling with crazed laughter! Ah... this just made my evening!
| acantabloom chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
This is brilliant! I love both Saiyuki and Journey to the West, so...well, it's hilarious. I can't wait to read more of these.
And the ending was great.