okay different from the other story

a suggestion

it was a bit hard to see whos pov it was so put that in like *Buffys POV* or something just so we the readers can understand

other then that good writing technique

needs another chapter, and maybe have it a bit longer

great work

AL

Promising set up.

Personally I'd love to see Angel and Buffy working together to fight off some mysterious bad guys. You could maybe say a few interesting things about where they are in their relationship now.

very good i would like to know more about buffy and her stay in hel, like a revisit of the past, and i would like to see what happens at their stay in the ghost town.