Reviews for One Step Closer
Tilly Truilio chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Oh yes, the leafy place I know it well; that was too funny! You did a great job on this, though I'll admit I've never heard of Naruto referred to as a carrot-top but even in the 'over-the-top' manner that you described them you still managed to perfectly capture their characters and personality.
Kage Hasu chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
Naruto and the book. . .now if only he had something like that with Yamato. . .
Darlando chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Isfahiyah chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Oh my GOD,that was funny! Why has no one else thought of that? Lots of hugs for making my day... That was almost TOO good.

pocketnin chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
E. love love love. Best part: "Kakashi-sensei reads PORN!"
WannabeFireFox chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
lmao xD the bell grabbing part was WAYY too easy cause geez kakashi is a freaking ex ANBU captain! but i love naruto's part! xDD
FallenPie chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
hahah very cute _
MysteryLady-Tx chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
LMAO...hehehe, OH man, yea that was AWESOME, hehehehe, Uzumaki, 1st of all then its and orange book, but then again, I wonder if you did that on purpose since it is a Parody...LOL'

I LOVED the whole Konoho—Konohom—Konowakalaka bit, hehehe