Reviews for One last try
hotgirlwizard chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
This was nice, I think it was missing something.
Elle-Pelle chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
this fic is great!
Greg House chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Cute! So enjoyable, and fun, and yummy to read on!

Good job! I love the flow of the story and the fact that it's not as dramatic or overwhelming as many others!

Superb read!
xxpiratexx chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
Great! Loved it. It could definitely happen. One thing, though: James never dated! He chased Lily ever since first year. However, for the purpose of the story, I suppose it was fine to omit that detail.


xxxraizaxxx chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
Pappy's Girl chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
loved it, I can't wait for your next update
SparklingEyesWithACrazyMind chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
sweet:D adorable actually:D:D
redredreglasses chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
AW! Cute story!

Awesome oneshot! ]

Karin chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
I really like how you wrote James and Lily in this story, their friendship in particular. What really kept me reading was how easy it was for them to talk and tease one another. Their interactions were sweet. Good job!
SweetSouthernGal chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
The end was a little anticlimatic...but it was still good...A cute idea, I like oblivious James...nice job.
summersgirl2526 chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
that was sweet
lilsnjamesy chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
awesum!so sweet!
mustardgirl1128 chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
haha, that was awesome, and SO adorable! I loved it. I love JamesLily fics, and this one was perfect! I liked how you had them go from what they are ALWAYS depicted as to friends to BOY FRIEND AND GIRL FRIEND! And I liked the Sirius part (I am a Sirius sucker!)
serindraxx chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
hehehe, i loved it. it fits SO well. keep it up!

ChocolateGal16 chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
This story is really gret! So romantic!