|Reviews for My Enemy Is My Enemy|
| Shadowhagai chapter 2 . 12/26/2008
Can you make me a TakxTlaloc fic filled with romanctic stuff and ,pretty please,pretty please with
cookie'n'cream with cherry on a top...*Doing the puppy dog pout*
| Shadowhagai chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
Ya know,I think I kinda like it and its very romantic but it doesn't mean anything accept this here.
| NoLongerNewhi chapter 2 . 7/6/2008
Aw...don't tell me you're not going to do anymore for this story? D:
It's SO good! The way you put things down is just...wow. I would read anything you type! And I would love to read more of this story if you did it...
| Heavenly-hands2 chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
You did a wonderful job the first time!
But now it even better now that you've rewritten it.
I hope to see more of this fic if you're willing to keep going with it.
Like I said before, you mske Tlaloc and Tak a hot couple. Sorry, thats just the fangirl side of me.
| Ashley C chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
you were right, I see why you were laughing at the end, Deamonchick! I thought You wrote it really well, but add a few more descriptions, I could see it but it leaves at lot in the blur, paint a tad bit more details on your next story, which there'd better be! Your grammer was awesome as always and Far supieror to mine.
I have only watched like three episodes of TAk and no Game thingys except for a few but I could follow along which I think shows that your point was clear, I Grammer/English teacher of mine said that every story that really connects to people can paint a picture, and the more detail and info you can put in, in the fewest words possible (but lively imaginative Words) really grabs people.
Le' Friend of la Works of Art(yours)
| MagicNein chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
Oh my God. I honestly did not think I'd like this as much as I did when I started reading. I cannot believe I am saying this-but I'd read more if you wrote it like this. Because this is damn good. It's out-of-character, but in-character at the same time. I like an Author that can do that.
| MazterofMythology chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
Wow, when I first saw that this was a TakxTlaloc story, I did not want to even look at the summary.
But this is actually a good story. Tak and Tlaloc would make a hot couple.
Very nice story.
| TOONSRULE chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
It's really good! ...A little creepy, but good none the less!