Reviews for bitter cream
it would be reyna chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
omg. hashtag heartbreaking :((((((( i've read snippets of this fanfic before but i've never really had time to actually read it. here i am now though so i hope that's alright? this is great and i just- feeeeeels.
Kazminy chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
This was incredibly realistic. I am a fan of angst fiction but it's hard to find a good one. You have delivered that to your audience spectacularly! Splendid job :)
A Midsummer chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Random surreal interaction between. Then again, five years is a long time. Enough time to quench the flames of passion that had took hold of the remaining members of Team Seven.
floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Great story!
Ava Whitlock chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Its real...the story felt real...

There are no happy endings...and everyone's gonna die...

And that was ridiculously pessimistic, and I do appreciate fluffy and happy fics, but this one left a raw, bitter taste in my when one drinks black coffee...that's what made it sincere and candid...sometimes, you just dont beat around the bush and sugercoat things, you call a spade a spade...and that's what I love about your fics...

If I were to rate this fic, I would give it a good 6 out of 10...
ALICE chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
You really do write angst well, it's not so terribly dramatic, there aren't always happy endings (at least not in this fic), and somehow, you can make it so that even though there isn't a happy ending, it's still extremely satisfying. (0.o did i spell that wrong?)
MyUsedRomance chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
i think they will forever break my heart, yes.
EWHH its Kenna chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
TigerLilyette chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
i really like it :)
red.masenko chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
yeah.. not sweet. but really good. not too short. sad.

so this was somewhere outside Konoha? cos if it was in Konoha, they would see each other more often than once in five years. that was really good!
Sienna Maiu chapter 1 . 4/16/2008

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I have nothing decent to say

AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
It is sweet. I like it. Not fluffy, not happy, just a very real way of Sasuke coming back and no one there to greet him, because that is how most people are. They can't keep waiting, hoping, chasing forever.


and that reminds me, of 'ice cream and polish'. Apparently I also reviewed to that. but I don't believe it either, so here is a quick review for that (sorry I'm too lazy to sign out, review, and then sign in again).


I really love how you protrayed their friendship. Showing that sometimes, when it gets to be too hard and too much, they fall back to their other personality and just become Girls. like they have two sides, and while one side is shown more often than the other, the second side is the one that keeps them together and prevents them from breaking.



Melitza chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Wow. This was so utterly, utterly bitter - it actually made me cringe and want to cry. The awkward dialog and utter fraction between them is tangible.

And yet, it fits perfectly, as much as it pains me to realize that. Man, I wish there was a happy second chapter to this. Sasuke needs to take his head out of his $$ and maybe change things for the better! *sobs melodramatically*
CinaBina chapter 1 . 2/17/2008 starting to wonder if u ever write uh...happy endings for this couple.
i Wuv you Blondie chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
I liked it. I like this Sasuke. The one who actaully talks, but is still Sasuke in the distant sort of way.

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