|Reviews for Betrayal|
| DeadFuzz chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Oh wow! deep! interesting story idea! Love it!
| Anon chapter 9 . 11/8/2008
This story... is effing awesome :P
I love every bit of it. CartmanxWendyxStanxKyle triangles kick ass!(Not that there are many of them)
| Otempora42 chapter 9 . 5/20/2008
All right, just going to review the whole story in one go, since I have to go in a bit.
I love Kyle/Wendy. I'm so glad that there's more fics with them now. And I think you write it very well. Style is all right - I like slash if it's well done, but I'm not a big fangirl. However, I do like it here. I wish you'd focus more on the Style, though, since Kyle and Wendy seem to be getting more focus.
I like Kenny a lot. He's a basically good guy, but you acknowlege his background and needs. I was glad that he didn't sell out Kyle, though. And Cartman is such a bastard. It's great. :D
I also like how you represent Kyle's sexuality. Being bi myself, I know what it's like, and you've done a good job with it. And I hate how people think bisexuals are just homosexuals in denial, or heterosexuals who "just want to be different". So, yes, pleased with that.
I noticed that you've used some English-isms, but you're getting better, which is good. I've had some trouble with that, as well, so I know how weird it is having to correct yourself.
Anyway. Good luck on your exams (and I retroactively sympathize with your art coursework. It SUCKS. Coursework in general, I mean. I'm sure your art is quite good), and I hope we get to see a new chapter soon. :)
| kyleisgod chapter 9 . 3/6/2008
I'm very sad to see this story on hiatus. I want to know what'll happen. :P I hope you kick the coursework's ass and get back to this fic ASAP. Cartman is perfect here and it only adds to poor Kyle's problems. Yay.
| drarryderps chapter 9 . 1/27/2008
OMG Cartman is an evil fat fuck! xD
Poor Kyle...He seems to like Wendy more than Stan. :O
| WittyWriter chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
I couldn't help myself. I did a fanart for your story.
I don't know if the link will work so I'll break it up (sometimes they don't show up).
ranatilion .deviantart art /Betrayal-74576700
| WittyWriter chapter 9 . 1/12/2008
Holy shit dude. I just got around to reading this.
I love you. I love you. I love you.
You write the characters amazing.
And it happens to involve all of my favorite pairings.
Yay for Kenny choosing friendship over cash. Yay for Cartman being a conniving manipulative bastard. (I wouldn't have him any other way) *fangirl squees*
Dude the scene where Wendy was kissing Stan and saw Kyle crying was just wow. That would have been a sight.
I'm tempted to draw a picture of Kenny and Kyle getting wasted now.
| SilverHollowShadow922 chapter 9 . 1/11/2008
i love Cartman, he is my favorite one, but I cant help but feel sympathetic for Kyle. awesome story!
| SilverHollowShadow922 chapter 7 . 1/11/2008
poor kyle! and poor kenny getting dragged into it by cartman! grr. but i love it still. please write more! .
| Little Loki chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
| Invader Bijou chapter 8 . 1/5/2008
wo more please XD
| Invader Bijou chapter 7 . 1/3/2008
I wonder whatll happen next!
| kyleisgod chapter 7 . 12/28/2007
The title of this chapter kind of gave it away, but I was still excited when I saw it in my inbox. The plot is really thickening here. I'm glad someone else noticed how Cartman sometimes says Kenny's name oddly. I noticed you used "pissed" instead of some other "drunk" variation. "Pissed" isn't used as much in American slang, but I'm sure most people here will forgive you for that. Just remember that your characters are Americans. Kenny's involvement was good here. Now the main four and Wendy are all in the story in some way. Hurray! I look forward to the next update.
| JuulChii chapter 7 . 12/28/2007
o ow, now Kenny know it!
Pleas update soon!
| JuulChii chapter 6 . 12/24/2007
I've read all your chapters in one day and I think it's an awesome storie!
Keep going please.