| Reviews for Enlightenment |
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   chocolatedad chapter 31 . 7/17 The timing of the plotting is just right! |
| slytherinsal chapter 39 . 6/27 not native but assumed you'd had them portkey elsewhere |
| slytherinsal chapter 34 . 6/26 well, I know you're American. How do I know that? Only Americans have house numbers like 2187. It's a very long road in England if the numbers go over 800 lol! Enjoying it. |
| genie mann chapter 41 . 6/24 I like the story alot. I hope you return to it! |
| Mary777777 chapter 8 . 5/30 Ugh, you do intend the creepy pedophile to be likeable. No, thanks! |
| Mary777777 chapter 7 . 5/30 Wow, Sara is super creepy. Who is that flirty and suggestive to a child?! Is she a pedophile? I didn't see any warnings about sexual assault... I hope you don't intend her to be likeable because she comes off as super gross. |
| Abstract01 chapter 12 . 5/16 I've enjoyed your easy-reading, carefree presentation style. Before reading (I sourced this story from other author's favorites) I read some reviews. Wow! Some people get their knickers in a twist over gafla (reference Dune, the Frank Herbert books; minor trifles, gadflies). Thank you for your creative art (especially as a first time author!). You make a positive outlook, with sufficient detail (but not a bunch of word-stuffing or world-building) to make an enjoyable reading pass-time. And this is just one summer holiday! |
| arata7kasuga chapter 7 . 5/15 So where is Hermione in all this? |
| arata7kasuga chapter 4 . 5/15 Three vaults and he has barely that much? What? SO much for being an old family lol. |
| Ultach chapter 29 . 2/23 Do you never use a dictionary? Your ubiquitous misuse of PASSED where you should be using PAST and PAST where you should be using PASSED is ridiculous. Examples of both are rife in this chapter(29). Quite annoying, so please correct them. Ciao. |
| skullkid1515 chapter 1 . 12/1/2023 THIS! I read this YEARS ago! I don't know if it was here, or somewhere else, but at the time, I forgot to save it to my library. I lost it, and couldn't find it for AGES! At some point, I wondered if I had just imagined it all and gaslit myself into thinking it was real. I am overwhelmed with joy to have found it once again and to know it's real. Truly a wonderful, amazing fic 3 3 3 |
| csgtforever chapter 41 . 11/26/2023 please continue this! |
| gusjo chapter 8 . 10/16/2023 Oh, now that chapter ending is just so very promising! |
| csheila chapter 41 . 8/8/2023 Such a great story, even though its not finished Sirius must quit competing with Harry. Otherwise he will lose him |
| csheila chapter 26 . 8/8/2023 Cousin or not, i have the same reaction to him marrying Ginny |