this seemed like a really great story, but i'm a bit sad that it hasnt been updated for almost 11 years now. i loved this work of yours and i wish i could see it through, but i guess that its for another life

Nice story but with a realy slow burn.

Not really happy how long Harry takes to cut with Ron.

Story is unfinished and I don't think we will see much more, but it was nice for an afternoon read

WELL I BET YOU HAD A LOT OF RESPONSE FROM THIS CHAPTER, ME I WOULD HAVE HAD DUMBLEDORE PUT INTO JAIL AND FURTHER CHARGED HIM WITH ALL THE ILLEGAL STUFF HE HAD PUT HARRY AND HERMOINE IN

Well this chapter is all about Books, library’s and homework...sigh

You need to expand your chapters, I see this chapter as a single paragraph of twenty short sentence’s

Making um bridge nice!
Its a terrific tale. I love it. I wish it was a bit elaborated and published as a book. I love it

Please come back and continue this!

If Deatheaters know the prophecy that does raise the issue of what they do about it...or not.

why harry is nothing without glasses...whyyyyyyyyyy

Reread this after first reading it a couple of years ago.

Very enjoyable. Would have lived to see the story continue !

KD

Wow! Update soon.

It's be a good while since ive read something this good that wasn't recommended to me by a family member or friend. I can legitimately say i hope you can recapture your mojo, an continue writing this story.

Yet ANOTHER GREAT story ABANDONED.

This is pretty decent, though long abandoned.

It falls into the usual scenario of manipulative Dumbledore fanfics- he manipulates, cheats and harms, then his victim (usually Harry but sometimes others) forgive him with a lecture. Repeat again and again.

Still it is fairly well written.

I don't know why I even started reading this. Didn't look at the dates as I usually do. Authors who have not updated within 2 years should remove the story or offer it to someone else. ARGH!