lol Hermione's parents names change all the time it's humorous to me

That emphasis on PERSONALLY is something left to the imagination, I wouldn't wanna mess with Flitwick at this point

This is probably one of the best Harry Potter Fanfictions I have read in a while, really wish that you could continue it

This was incredible! I wish it were finished, but I loved it all the same!

This fic was really hard to read a second time, it’s not as interesting or impressive as I originally thought

Harrison Jimmy Potter? That has got to be the most horrendous version of his name I’ve ever come across

Invisibility cloak covering the mind , it’s sounds interesting at first read but yeesh. I’m still liking this tho

Susan is a hufflepuff and really didn’t have much interaction with Harry, how would she know that the Dursleys don’t like magic, it’s not even something Harry talks about

I’m rereading this fic and I still can’t help but cringe when i see Harrison, the name just doesn’t fit at all. Should’ve just stuck with Harry

Damn it was good until you went back to telling the story like it was a j.k. rowling repeat.
Thee are supposed to your story not based onher story lines jeez.

Harry is Harry not Henry not Harrison not Harold.
You can have your name Harry without it being short for anything.

Harrison is not and was never his name. Harry is his name.

Very funny how the amounts in most Harry Potter storys are so small when the Potters were the richest in the magical world not just england. The Potters were Trillionaires and you have thier vaults at less than million

Are you going to finish this

The interaction between hermoine and Harry is more like married couples. If you are pulling Harry and hermoine being matured that’s bollocks. It’s get irritating after some time. To much repetition and interaction seems robotic.