Reviews for Enlightenment
Guest chapter 41 . 6/6
Reread this after first reading it a couple of years ago.

Very enjoyable. Would have lived to see the story continue !

KD
Rori Potter chapter 41 . 6/5
Wow! Update soon.
Geldrid L. Malifaka chapter 1 . 5/17
It's be a good while since ive read something this good that wasn't recommended to me by a family member or friend. I can legitimately say i hope you can recapture your mojo, an continue writing this story.
Specky Clarke chapter 41 . 4/25
Yet ANOTHER GREAT story ABANDONED.
stevem1 chapter 41 . 4/15
This is pretty decent, though long abandoned.

It falls into the usual scenario of manipulative Dumbledore fanfics- he manipulates, cheats and harms, then his victim (usually Harry but sometimes others) forgive him with a lecture. Repeat again and again.

Still it is fairly well written.
HeartsGlow chapter 41 . 3/12
I don't know why I even started reading this. Didn't look at the dates as I usually do. Authors who have not updated within 2 years should remove the story or offer it to someone else. ARGH!
HeartsGlow chapter 40 . 3/12
"Hermione quickly forgave him" WHAT?! For buying a desk? For not telling her? Why? Why should he, at only 14 years of age, be obligated to tell her anything, really. That is ridiculous! Thankfully, my sons would never put up with being treated that way by any girl. And they were raised to treat girls properly, but not to be emotionally abused by girls.
HeartsGlow chapter 32 . 3/12
Yeah, Albus is only sorry that he got caught. Funny that Hermione gets angry with Harry over inconsequential crap that has nothing to do with her, yet expects him to just blow off the fact that she kept him from knowing she was using a time-turner all year. Classic sign of a controlling abuser. I always wondered about the horcrux. It was Dumbledore who said it couldn't be removed, but he doesn't know everything he thinks he knows. The horcrux is in the scar, separate from Harry's soul. They could have tried a muggle way... cut it out surgically.
HeartsGlow chapter 29 . 3/12
They should also tell Amelia what Albus had planned
HeartsGlow chapter 28 . 3/12
Harry doesn't need to worry too much, Minerva was supposed to have him, Sirius has a claom on him, Amelia offered him a home. He has places that he will be well protected, so what is the problem? Amelia wont be cowed by Dumbles, and I'm sure Minerva won't be either, Sirius probably needs some time recuperating
HeartsGlow chapter 27 . 3/12
For someone so bright, Hermione is idiotic. She gets mad for the most inane reasons. She needs to just shut up and think.
HeartsGlow chapter 26 . 3/12
Yes, but Ginny is a very, very distant cousin. If you did one of those ancestry things, you might be surprised to find many people have married "relatives" unknowingly.
HeartsGlow chapter 22 . 3/11
I think he went too easy on her
HeartsGlow chapter 20 . 3/11
You don't mention Remus at all here.
HeartsGlow chapter 10 . 3/11
Just cannot imagine ANY just-13 year old boy, let alone Harry, saying "cheeky little minx" or "baby you are the best". Anyone over 20 reading this is rolling their eyes. "If he was right... and another would be in trouble" Who would that be? Harry doesn't know about Peter so which man does he think would be in trouble? "If he was wrong he would be screwed". Why?
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