Reviews for Sacrifice
TinaalovesMints chapter 2 . 9/26/2009
aww i love this!

itd be so great if you updated and kept updating! :)

it doesn't matter if its been years!

people who alerted and stuff would just be happy you updatedd.

TinaalovesMints chapter 1 . 9/26/2009

haha :)
Love it D chapter 2 . 5/30/2008
Love it, love it !
xoX-IHeartSureal-Xox chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
I really love this so far, you write really well, i hate when people have crappy punctuation etc. its really annoying to read...but you have good grammer (which is a relief) and a nice style of writing, please continue this soon; i want to read more!LoL :D
angelofsweetness chapter 2 . 12/15/2007
Lolx, the way they keep bickering is extremely adorable.


Roxas is in! Yay! -grins-

Lovely chap. Hope the see more of the Kaioraness later on.

Update soon!

KairiHeartzX chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
omfg i love this story so far! update soon!
From The Stone Bridge chapter 2 . 12/14/2007
please,please, please update!
Serenity's Melody chapter 2 . 12/13/2007
Ha! great chapter please update soon! :]]
Malcolm Yuy chapter 2 . 12/12/2007
This chapter really intrigued me...

I wonder if Sora and Kairi will EVER get off on the RIGHT's funny to see how they interact. I imagine that Sora either would wear punk/skateboarding clothes, or goth drab...I'd go with my first impression, 'cause it's just how I imagine him if he didn't wear his own personal garb...except for in my fic...anyways...

Great job! Keep up the great work, and I'll review you next time. 'Till then, later!
Serenity's Melody chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
me ike plz update soon!
Blowing Raspberries chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
I LOVED THIS. honestly. Gosh. Their personalities. AND SORA SOUNDS HAWT! 8D

I couldn't stop reading.

this is pretty cool. I shall now add this to my favs and alert.

g'day! C:


Malcolm Yuy chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
A few usage of words bug me, (like principal and you're [your]), but other than that, this fic's fine so far...

Keep the good work, and hopefully I'll get more into it next chapter. Later!
angelofsweetness chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Hmm...nice beginning though rather confusing at first. I got it eventually though. xD The detail in this fic seems pretty pleasable. I liked how you specified the emotions and the surroundings whenever Kairi talks or sees Sora. Nice touch.

Although, I suggest you elaborate more on the surroundings. Show how the hallways are or how the students are bustling about. It'll give this fic an extra kick. Also, no offense but if you could change their last names, it would be better. Try some japanese surnames considering their first names are in japanese. This is just some advise. You don't really have to follow it. xD

Nice start. Update soon!

EternalSnowxxx chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Ooh cool. I like it so far!:D

Then again, I love SoraXKairi so it could be the worse thing ever and I'd still say it was awesome. xD Not that this is bad. . .it really is good! I swear! x]

And it wasn't too short for me, I dunno about everyone else in the world, but I thought the length was good. :]

Then again we all love long chapters!

Well most of us, and yes I realize I'm babbling on! But it's what I do. P