|Reviews for Gone With The Sin|
| Louisvuittonfreak chapter 7 . 11/11/2011
I like your story. It's good.
| BellaLovesEdwardMoreThanJake chapter 13 . 10/22/2010
What's going to happen next?Is Edward ever going to catch up to Bella?
| LexyCullen4Eternity chapter 13 . 1/15/2009
poor corey. i love aro, his curiousity is cute.
| twilightwisher94 chapter 13 . 12/7/2008
well now that you finally got this chapter out you better put more you quick or i might die. no trying to be rude just saying your writing a good story and when i read stories like this i cant stop thats why it was so important to me that Breaking Dawn came out! please write fast...
| I'm Randomspicuous chapter 3 . 12/3/2008
its really good so far! does that mean its a vampire deer?
| The Digital Artist chapter 13 . 12/1/2008
So far so good. I like seeing this alternate outcome, the book had an almost predictable rescue. My only issue is during Edward's point of view, when 2 is used in place of to, but I'm picky with grammar.
Keep up the good work.
| megan chapter 13 . 12/1/2008
please tell me your still writing i love it really keep going
| DarkDefender89 chapter 13 . 12/1/2008
update soon; plz reunite Edward and Bella soon!
| DarkDefender89 chapter 2 . 12/1/2008
a BUNNY! lol.
| sarah-jess chapter 12 . 7/28/2008
awesome story :) please write more, i'd love to see what happens next :) good job btw
| Edward4eva chapter 12 . 5/29/2008
i luved it lol
| luvableangela chapter 12 . 5/29/2008
ok since you told me to "I lovvee it"..lol. It's a great story. A sad story for the guy but otherwise I liked it. I also liked the part where he kissed Bella. it's probably going to give it a good twist later in the story.
| lexycullen4eternity chapter 12 . 5/27/2008
i love it but are him and bella going to end up together?
| lovexisxamazing86 chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
| LexyCullen4Eternity chapter 11 . 5/18/2008
ooh, i love things envolving the salem witch trials and especially a mix of witch trials and vamp turnings is great.