Reviews for The Future King
AllenxEdward chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Amazing! I loved the story and the rhyme scheme. I loved the ending line.
Anitoon3 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Woah! This is so good! Thank you for making this! :)
Kirtash8 chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Wuo *-* I really like a lot your poem. It was very very good and dark. I love it!It's a very good description of the hollow of Ichigo!I hope you'll continue writing!ByE!
Nephelae chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
heh, pretty good and totally evil :D you accualy should have put it in the horror Catgory.. still good though! -
Nakimochiku chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
GAH! you took my puppet master line! but i like the last to lines most. it struck me, and i could just see hichi-chan smiling like a bloody lunatic amongst a sea of bodies. heh. good job, ish likes.
with love - Elincia chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
pretty cool! xD honestly, i don't read poetry much and idk why i am now-maybe 'cause i've seen some good ones recently, haha. xD