Reviews for Effect and Cause
vivafiction chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
i've reread this five times in the past day trying to figure out a coherent review. this is beautiful and i am a big fan of all of your work and how even though it strikes me with the slightest bit of anachronism, it's still so very possible and seems so real. and i love the backwards composition of this, it was entirely too perfect.
Sun Syndrome chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
I love how even though it was very vague, it left a big impact! This is definitely my favorite piece from you.
BlueDove chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
This was like a poem. It reminds me a bit of Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton, but it's unique on its own, and so beautifully painful.
merixthexninja chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
You have a wonderful writing style, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. How you just barely touched on what happened really made the story something great and delicate. I'm favoriting this.
NotReal401 chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
That is so buatifully sweet. :)

Well done . Really.
Lady Charity chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Beautiful...absolutely beautiful...this is amazing story, you've written this really well. I felt the mood, and your vocabulary is quite unique. Poor Zuko, though! You're a really good writer, good job!