|Reviews for Chronicle of Darkness|
| hana chapter 5 . 4/16/2012
tehe I really love the whole Hacker conversation and use of the rules! I can't wait to read more. Update soon!
| SlackerDee chapter 25 . 8/13/2011
Wow. That's really the only thing that I can think of that properly conveys just how much I enjoyed reading this and how impressed I am for your eye to detail. Seriously, this has got to be one of the best fics I've read in quite some time. The world you have built here is just astounding. I can imagine it being real, which in my eyes, means you nailed it as a writer. I devoured this fic. And I hope you haven't given up and are still working on it. So much to be said and done and I'd hate to miss that!
| Zealot chapter 25 . 8/4/2011
Great story, I liked it very much. Hope you continue this!
| NefariousImp chapter 26 . 4/29/2011
Lynx Law please tell me you haven't given up on this fic! Out of every fic book novel or movie I've ever read or seen, none compare to this. I've read this dang thing 4 times over the course of 2 yrs. Hoping to come back and find it finished or more than one chapter added. It's been a year since an update. Please don't give up on it!
| WishfulThought chapter 26 . 4/26/2011
I really like this story. I had started reading it a long time ago and only recently found it again, that being said I notice it has been a little over a year since the last update; so the question here is, are you going to continue? I might shed a few tears if you have given up on this plot, I had gotten so excited when I had found it again...
| green eyed typhoon chapter 26 . 3/20/2011
this stories great, and really the only reason you have a smallish review count is b/c riddick has a small fandom on . anyway its one of if not the best riddick story iv come across and i was wondering if it was still going or not? hopefully if it is youll update soon
| Hailey C. Black chapter 26 . 2/3/2011
I hope you can update this story soon:) I really like it. I read on your profile that your life has been kinda hectic lately? That sucks, so you have my sympathy. Your story is really good but I'm not sure how I feel about all the different characters you're following, however, I am impressed. I'm more of a follow one character type of writer, but I think I could learn something if I tried it your way:) You are a great wtiter:) so I really hope this story isn't in stasis for too much longer;)
| my shangri-la chapter 26 . 10/5/2010
I LOVE this story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! )
| Lousy Poet Automaton chapter 24 . 8/7/2010
It's fairly interesting and pretty well-done.
1) Riddick should easily be able to tell that Jack is into him. He was able to smell it when she was on her period during the first movie - he could easily smell her arousal in the closed environment of a space ship.
2) This is your story, so I don't expect this to change, but I do wish you hadn't white-washed Riddick's character and essentially made him a misunderstood gladiator type. Nothing about him is evil in your story. He's just merciless. A really great fic on this site, Persephone and Hades, implements him the way I like to imagine - a real psycho killer with moments of good.
3) I hope the necromongers show up in your story.
So, good luck with this. Will keep reading.
| Kimmae chapter 3 . 6/11/2010
There was a point when Zimmerman thought on Jack as "Jack," not "Audrey." I love your characters, canon and invented; they interact so smoothly. The arguments between Jack and Riddick in front of Zimmy seemed unusual at first, but then as they bantered I realized it made perfect sense, being that they have that sort of argumentative "elitism" with each other, and it wouldn't matter if a teacher-or a whole class-was eavesdropping. Excellent fight choreography, too. I had a hard time imagining Jack's hand-stand/spring/hoo-haw over Riddick to slit his throat, but I think I've got a rough picture in my head of what she's doing.
| Strike82 chapter 26 . 5/20/2010
great story...looking forvard for the next chapters...Hmmm...Sorin cel rau...Ar you romanian?
| Rayne StarDust chapter 25 . 5/18/2010
Well, the good thing is that Riddick now accepts that Jack gets 'girl moods'. A step in the right directions, I think. The bad thing, Jack now has a 24/7 shrink on hand, so she'll probably be in that 'girl mood' for a bit. I'm wondering how the shrink will psychoanalyze their relationship and Rachel's quirks. At least Riddick will have an older socially experienced male to talk to when Jack's plan blows up in his face.
Awesome chapter and story! I took my time to reread it again, and it's still a favorite!
| killernurd chapter 11 . 4/15/2010
Just started reading this story today, and wanted you to know, *damn* it's awesome.
Your grasp of the English language is pretty spectacular, and I haven't noticed any glaring grammatical errors, which is a major plus in my book.
You're laying out an intriguing plot, and it's held my attention for the last three hours now. The characterizations match closely enough to what I remember from the movies for them to be believable, and the extra details are nothing short of excellent.
I'm very much liking what I'm reading, and looking forward to reading the rest!
| Kags107 chapter 26 . 4/15/2010
Hey dude, love the story. Stayed up all nite readin'. You should start publishing you're own novels, i like you're plots and characters, very real. You could easily get into the Sci-Fi/Fantasy genre of novelists. It's kinda facinating how close Jack and I are in personalities, switching from docile to hostile in a nanosecond. Keep it up and i'll keep reading.
If you ever get into writing as a profession, let me know about it,k?
i'd totally buy you're books, i'm an avid reader and would love read more of your works.
Thanks for the entertainment:)
| Searching for Serenity chapter 25 . 4/5/2010
I loved this chapter! I love your portrayal of Jack, and was thrilled that she was a huge part of this chapter! I thoroughly loved her therapy session and was waiting with bated breath for the truth behind her repressed memory of an explosion to be revealed...only Riddick had to come bursing in and ruin it! His timing couldn't have been worse! But when Jack suspected that Dr. Tachygnic had betrayed her...I completely loved how she accosted him, and his shocked and terrified reaction. A furious, potentially murderous Jack more than makes up for not finding out about that memory! I do hope, though, that the doctor will continue to work with her aboard the ship, and that a breakthrough will be made. I can't wait for the next chapter!