|Reviews for Chronicle of Darkness|
| Crazy Girl Writer chapter 25 . 4/4/2010
I am so happy that you updated. Thank you thank you thank you. I love this story and the characters. It's kinda cute how riddick kinda looked out for Urchin. Although i did want a little more urchin in the story but thats just cause i grew a little attached to him. i love that your chapters are long and commend you for being able to write them so long. Looking forward to reading more of this story.
| Ookami Sakura chapter 11 . 3/12/2010
I love the duality with Rachel and her alias, it also fits very nicely with Jacks personality and her coping mechanisms...
| Lori chapter 25 . 3/11/2010
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY IT IS GREAT
| MexiJew chapter 21 . 3/6/2010
Hehe. Tacky Nick o that person just became my best friend. I've never been to a therapist session befor, and I don't really want'a either. It'd be total shit for the therapist :D I'm a little monster, "Diablita" I am called :3 And I noticed you quote you always have the chapters, its a great quote. I think when I first heard it i was watching Lord of War. Such a bad movie, with its whole moral and stuff, but good, by showin us chilluns the badness in the world, eh? Ai Dios, this is long ;D but soon, it's comin to an end and I'll have to wait for your amazin' chap's,
| MexiJew chapter 20 . 3/6/2010
Foo-bar? Haha. that's how i read it ha. Loving the end of the fightin scene as well~ and landry. "You gonna fold that?" xD
| MexiJew chapter 16 . 3/6/2010
o thank you, God :D
| MexiJew chapter 15 . 3/6/2010
Oi, tha's nice :) "One or nine..." xD I love the dialogue you have in the stories...haha. I had an energy beber...ah, dink? I think that's what its called.. Energy dink :) lookin' foward for mas! More, i think :)
| MexiJew chapter 9 . 3/5/2010
:3 violence. Mwah mwah xD Haha. Is it me or do all the girls in the school have like...i dunno, a weird ass obbsession wiff Riddick? O.o anyway, great, as always :3
| MexiJew chapter 2 . 3/4/2010
ONLY the second chapter? Damn. Very Lengthy lol OMFG yay Jack?Riddick stuff :3
| MexiJew chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
YOU are God.
| Bloody-Asphode11 chapter 24 . 2/28/2010
UPDATE DAMN YOU UPDATE
IT"S BEEN A MONTH WHEN IS JACK GOING TO SPRING HER TRAP? by the way to go with that one dream sequence in the earlier chapter the spar one...
you know i wonder if that can actually come to a reality D
UPDATE SON LIKE NOW
HEAR ME ME ROAR
if your wondering yes i,m cynically insane and proud of it XP
| Kat chapter 25 . 2/23/2010
since Im no good at writing reviews(and writing English in general)Id just like to tell you that I love your story so far and that your "reference"material is not available anymore(or at least Im getting that message when Im clicking on the link).
Maybe Ill draw a fanart one day(no time right now..but Id like to.)If I do youll be the first to know ;P
| Searching for Serenity chapter 24 . 2/16/2010
WOW! What an amazing story! I absolutely love it! Your original characters are very well developed, and your original settings are so vividly described that they become real. For example: Daedalus Station. My favorite character is Jack. I love what you've done with her. The repressed emotions thing is a very interesting idea. I've also gotten the impression that Jack might be suffering from Multiple Personality Disorder, having at least two personalities, Deirdre and Jack. My favorite scene so far was when Jack was threatening the merc in the gym in order to get Riddick to take her with him. It was a very emotional and powerful scene. You said that this story would be COR your way. I hope that Jack won't die at the end of your story, after all, the Jack in your story is a survivor! I never liked how Jack died at the end of the movie, it seemed so senseless. I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter! You've got me hooked!
| Chaosborn chapter 25 . 2/4/2010
Great story. Read it from beginning to endpoint in 2 days I was so engrossed. Please please tell me that you havent abandoned it.
| Barranca chapter 21 . 2/2/2010
Finally those guys who framed Cerberus are busted! I wonder what will be in the news...