| Reviews for Organization XIII and the great out doors |
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   Pokemon67 chapter 5 . 3/3/2013 Really like your story! Please write more soon. I mean REALLY soon! |
| Raegy-Chan chapter 5 . 8/26/2010 Hehe! Saix screams like a girl! XD Lol! Cougar attack! |
| FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A chapter 5 . 4/26/2008 They're in real trouble now...if Zexion could stop smelling, what about the others? Why do they still stink? |
| FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A chapter 4 . 4/3/2008 Haha, even Luxord lost at poker! I love Demyx-he's so cute! |
| Masshiro-Inu chapter 4 . 4/2/2008 Its not a bad plot idea, but you seem to be making a lot of grammar mistakes, you might want to take more time to proof read your chapters, and add a little more detail to each chapter to make it longer and more enjoyable. Like the first person that reveiwed said, this story has the same idea but their not completely the same. Keep updating. |
| Flame05 chapter 3 . 2/21/2008 haha still funny |
| FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A chapter 3 . 2/19/2008 ...do I want to know what happens to them next? 'Cuz right now they seem screwed... |
| Flame05 chapter 2 . 2/17/2008 AW A Family such a good story update soon |
| DCB0428 chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 I wrote this first. Look for yourself. :-( |