Reviews for At the Heart
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
Thank you for this. Very few fanfictions ever actually get me choked up like this, but your story has the ring of reality that reminds me if my present life. I can kind of relate to Danny and some of his emotions, which is probably why I'm crying like a fool. I appreciate that you added the part about not hurting, because usually, people just want the pain to stop.
Nameless32 chapter 1 . 1/27/2016
That was so sad I dropped 5 tears when it ended. It would be nice if you continued with him at the hospital and realizing his not dead then still trying to kill himself dash slowly caring for danny and of course feel guilty the dumbass.
ColdBloodedFalicity chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
Thank you. Just...thank you.
Lykeans chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
TopazDove chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
*in tears* damnit! Dash i am angry and upset so im taking it out on u! Im blaming u for this! U didnt even notice how Danny had been feeling!? And i thought u couldnt be even more of an asshole! U couldnt see how dead Danny's eyes must have been as he would get up and go to school and do everything he did everyday!? Didnt see how Danny WILLINGLY put up with ur fucking shit!? How much begging and pleading must have been in Danny's eyes as he looked up at u and wished for u to care and appreciate him!? Fuck u Asshole! *runs to Danny's grave in tears and lays down next to it and cries self to sleep*
SoulMore chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Dantalions chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
That was SO sad! Dx

Poor Danny, poor Dash.
moonflower29 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
thank you.
JiraiyaWhitney chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
This made me cry. I don't know whether it is because Danny killed himself or because he let his life get away from him and he lost himself in it too.

The A/n was touching, too. Thanks.
DarkAnubisAngel chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Thanks Rin, this was really good, no, it was EXTREMELY good... sad time right now, and even before now has been tough, I've contemplated that crap.. never followed through though, too chicken, too worried about how people would view me...religious fears.. I don't know.. lol... this was really sad, but it was really enjoyable.. Thanks SOO much for writing this

Kaizerwave King chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
Wow, this is a good story! Nice!
Earl of Grey chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
i loved it, very nicely written, though you've got several typos

Danny seems... odd, i don't know what about it, but..he just seems ...odd

Dash wanted him to meet his girlfriend, right? he loved Danny then, i think

a doll can't act, they can only be themselves or a doll, you can choose, but you can't change them
Aquawyrm chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
That's really sad. Logical, though. Identify problem, check. Identify solution, check. Carry out solution, check. Problem solved.