|Reviews for 生存|
| Sparkilyshoes chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
;.; please update this story, it's so wonderful and cute how you wrote rion and lilia, and rion is so (nosebleed) x-x
| Quandosonosolo chapter 2 . 12/3/2007
another awesome chapter! I like how you used the faucet as a way to represent Cain's "imperfection" Can't wait for an update
| xSapphireLightsx chapter 2 . 12/2/2007
wow sis you just keep amazing me everytime, this is good for someone who's not known galerians for long, awesome awesome -
yep you did job on cain, and aye that guy is fun to write about he's so cute and voilent and in someway beneath it all there's still his little kid that just want to be loved, *-* e
poor lilia, rion needs to find her a place to get better, o.o she must be really injured if she's having trouble breathing, -.- stupid rion and your short ciruiting
Rion: stupid lilia and walking up to me while i'm short ciruiting
Lilia: stupid rion short ciruiting when he doesn't have any delemtor
Rion: stupid...er...DAMN IT!
Lilia: I WIN! -
aw, so even though rion doesn't know he's a galerian he's noticing there's something not right about himself...heck, he cna use psychic powers lol but hm havig long amount of time without sleeping isn't normal good idea that'll spook him, you should use other things like he heals quicker than normal or something that could concern him further, but wow agaion seriously a brillent idea, sensing something up about himself but not knowing what it is for sure or what the answer is *-*
i'm happy you updated really quick and i love the chapter please hurry and do more again! XD awesome chapter once again
| Quandosonosolo chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
for someone new at galerians, thsi caputred a lot! Gredat job, can't wait for the next chapter!
| Magnolia Solace chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
I live intern in Japan right now and there is no holiday for thanks here. Different ones though.
Anyways... nice story. I don't like Lilia much anyways, lol. Poor little Rion having to carry fat Lilia.
Just noting that you had some misspells, spell check doesn't catch everything (especially cognates) so just try doing a once over yourself to see if it makes sense:
"lounge damage" Lung damage
I'm a language major (Russian) so looking for spelling errors in anything comes with the territory.
Good writing though! Keep up the great work!
| xSapphireLightsx chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
that, was, AWESOME! O.O OH MY GOD SO AMAZING I LOVE YOU FOR IT (glomps)
wow i really don't know what to say that was really good, totally kept me on my seat when poor rion was short circuiting, silly kids they should never run out of drugs lol but wow i never imagine what it'd be like it rion didn't have any delemoter and shorted, and most all, I LOVED THAT KISSIE! i saw so many sparks between them, ha get it sparks
Rion: -_-...(wind blows)
ah no LILIA WAKE YOU LAZY GIRL ;.; i hope she'll be okay, for some reason when rion lifted up her eyelid, i found it funny in some ways XD but then again it seemed like something he might do lol
Rion: (poking passed out lilia with a stick)
wah i wonder where they're going to go now, the hospital is out the question they'd both they captured by dorothy, unless they find a littl medic centre or something they're doom, DOM T.T
aw and rion's carrying her on his back. that looks very cute and funny at the same time -
Lilia: (kicks her legs) RIDE PONEY!
Rion: _ do that one more time and i'm dropping you!
Lilia: you wouldn't-AH (falls)
i hope you hurry up and finish the next part i must see what happens sis, HURRY HURRY HURRY XD