|Reviews for Clincher|
| Phantom Mime chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
Another story of yours that I liked. You really put depth into these two characters. Also, you use diction to your advantage. Keep it up. You are a talented writer.
Kudos on great grammar too.
| lon chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
can lon eat the tangerine? lon likes tangerines... :D
again, very well written!
| SuberXxXDuperXxXFunMachine chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
this is a good one shot but one prob, tobi is not obito, he is madara uchiha, it even says so in the magna(chapter three hundred and fitty something)...besides wasnt half of obitos body crushed?anyways besides that it waas a good story!
| Wrath Of Fire chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
To be honest, I'm pretty sure Itachi would be the only one smart enough to catch on that Tobi's running the whole thing.
And then he'd try to tell everyone else and they would ignore him. Just because. XD
Very good job, though. Wish it was longer.