Reviews for Brown Eyes
deliriousdancer chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
This is incredible. Where some people just notice the color of eyes, you have given us a look at what Bobby sees. And he never just notices the surface. Nicole, Alex, Frances and Brady and their role in and impact on Bobby's life, were captured perfectly. Sorry I missed before, glad I found it now.
gorengal chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
Sad, but perfect descriptions of each person in Bobby's life. Nicely done.
The Mominator chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
Nice piece. Very clever and perceptive.
rindy713 chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
wow! fascinating. all the key people, and he sees inside. i hope he realizes that brady's eyes are a window to no soul, but his own eyes are a window to a deep, though troubled, soul. they ARE different.
squarey chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Fabulous writing.
immafermata chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
That was very beautiful. It was very insightful and very true. I loved it. :)
DejaBlue1972 chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Wonderful and very powerful. I like it. :o)