|Reviews for Words of the Heart|
| Wu the Stoic chapter 13 . 3/15
This was wonderful, thank you.
| Kitsune1818 chapter 13 . 8/13/2011
I like this so much. Is the first time I read about Heero and Duo break up in this way, usually I got the same again and again (or is just that I pic those particular fics without thinking?): Heero leaves Duo for Relena, other pilot or just because he is just a bastard. Usually is Duo who is working for the relationship, the one who is suffering with his not reciprocate or many other reasons.
In this fic I saw the two of them suffering for his choises, Heero is the one who is feeling regretful and Duo is simply trying to go forward. I like that.
| Hellcat81 chapter 13 . 8/11/2010
well, i hope heero doesn't get too lost with staring at duo or otherwise their new kitchen will be flooded. :P
anyway, great fic. it's too bad you posted it all at once or otherwise it would have gathered more attention and more readers would have been able to enjoy it.
| Hellcat81 chapter 12 . 8/11/2010
yay, heero got it right. btw i would emphasize the 'what' playing in duo's mind in some way. the second one i mean. or the third. to show his surprise some more.
| Hellcat81 chapter 11 . 8/11/2010
wow, heero's being sarcastic. how unusual.
| Hellcat81 chapter 10 . 8/11/2010
you really write smart stuff in your fics. this time howie's advice. very true.
| Hellcat81 chapter 9 . 8/11/2010
this has to be on of my fave lines so fra in this fic: You know when you've found it, because you can feel it when they take it away. really gets you thinking. i think it's true.
| Hellcat81 chapter 8 . 8/11/2010
poor duo. i miss some info on what he's doing now on l2. i know it's not all that important but i still wonder.
| Hellcat81 chapter 7 . 8/11/2010
great inner monologue. your writing is really awesome. it really transmits the emotions to the reader.
| Hellcat81 chapter 6 . 8/11/2010
i suspected sth. like this but i am intrigued to see that such a wake-up call obviously didn't matter to heero. well, i hope duo leaving will do sth. else to heero's psyche.
| Hellcat81 chapter 5 . 8/11/2010
once again awesome characterization. like how you narrow down heero's POV to this typical black and white dimension. i wonder what is gonna happen next. i have a feel that maybe there won't be so much a chance for a future for them in the future cuz one can never know what will happen tomorrow.
| Hellcat81 chapter 4 . 8/11/2010
great characterization. on both duo and heero's part i think so far. btw, i like it that you have chapter summaries. however, i would additionally put a duo or heero POV warning at the top of each chapter to avoid confusion.
| Hellcat81 chapter 3 . 8/11/2010
wow, great chapter. very intense. the line 'But right now, everything you want is wrong.' really is the strongest of the chapter and like a punch to the gut. that's one tough thing to say. prob. logical in heero's kind of thinking but i feel he has screwed up a lot for him and duo.
| Hellcat81 chapter 2 . 8/11/2010
it seems like a really interesting start and i like how you portray duo. however, the story suffers from simple spelling mistakes which could have been avoided with a spell check program. i think the quality could improve considerably by beta-ing this fic.
| Houki Acer chapter 13 . 5/7/2009
This story is AMAZING! it is one of the best I have ever read. I know you wrote it a long time ago, but I just came across it now and I had to comment.
It is really sweet and I liked the short chapters a lot - this technique made it very dinamyc. And the portrait of feelings is awesome.
oh my, I really loved it!