|Reviews for This sudden urge|
| Artisa chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
Damn, this is awesome considering English isn't your first language! And it did seem very cutscene-y with all the cuts going to different parts of the island while censoring the main action! XD
It was really cute though, very in character for Elaine to make the first move, and for Guybrush to be all inexperienced and fumbling LOL!
| doc boy chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
I always knew she was talking about doing it when she said she doesn't want him to be preocoupied. Though I did have my doubts when they drinking wine and all that
| PeaceGem4 chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
That bit with the Important-Looking Pirates had me in stitches XDD Good job! I love this!
| Lauphen Staar chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
I absolutely loved that! XD Now whenever I play the game, save and go away for a bit, I'll wonder what's going on in my computer without me there XD
| MaidM chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
THIS SO SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED FOR REAL!
Seriously, this was awesome. A perfect little cut scene! You really had everyone's voices down perfectly. And I loved the mental image of wet Guybrush all wrapped up in a blanket by the fire. Aw! No wonder Elaine jumped him.
Bravo, and never stop writing.
| iceboxme chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
Ah, I think I'm a little young for that.
Haha just kidding. It was great. Very detailed...
Maybe too detailed. XD
Write more soon k?
| MinSora chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Wow, I really enjoyed this, I have to say. It's very well-written and the little story itself is just very interesting. Well done :).
I have to say, also, if you hadn't said at the beginning, I would've never guessed you weren't a native English speaker. Your English is great.