|Reviews for Together at last|
| Capra chapter 1 . 12/5/2001
I like it. My only suggestion is to get a beta reader, someone to edit your
fics before you post them. It'll really help the reader out. Also, by seperating
the dialogue, the story won't seem so cramped. Its somewhat hard to follow
the way it is. These are just suggestions, and you don't have to follow them
if you don't want to.
| JadeShadow chapter 1 . 9/3/2001
You need to work on your run-on sentences and (this is just to make it visually appealing) PLEASE please please please start a new paragraph with each line of dialouge! It makes it easier to read.
Anyway, this was really good and I enjoyed it a lot. Keep working at it-you've got skill and I see you going far...and (of course) ANAKIN TAHIRI FOREVER! :-)
| Tahiri Solo chapter 1 . 9/1/2001
Awwwww! This story is so good! I was smiling and giggling through the whole thing! (I giggle when I'm happy. LOL) It was so cute! Keep writing!