Reviews for X5 593 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! Zack's escape was well done - I've said it before, and I'll say it again: you're so creative! Zephyr's reindoctrination was a powerful segment. The dialogue is a little awkward, but all in all, this is one of my favorite fics! Please write more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I really love all these new characters you've got. You've created a very interesting X-series community. I like that Zell and Jaim are together (just love Jensen Ackles ;) I hope he doesn't cooperate with Renfro and do something with those pills Zell wouldn't like. He's the last of the X5 '49s, huh? (since Zephyr's '49 is dead, and so is 493 - which is Ben) I can't wait till Zephyr and Zell and Zack are reunited. I hope they and their loyal officers can find freedom, too. And I hope they're not too hard on their brother. |
![]() ![]() ohh,I can't wait 'till the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story, very stable introduction to your characters... I'm a little curious about how Zephyr has changed over the years... patience is not always one of my virtues ;P |
![]() ![]() Please continue with the story, I think it will get really good. |
![]() ![]() This is an excellent story! I just love it - I can see all the X5s interacting. I hope they don't make things too difficult with Zack, though. I somehow hope they can all unite without bloodshed. I like the new characters you created. Especially Jaim...anything to get a bit of Ben back :) Interesting to see how they've all grown. Poor Zephyr. His group sounds chilling. I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool. 3 team leaders who used to be extremely close, but drifted apart. Zack choosing Max over his old buddies. Zell becoming Manticore's good little soldier, regardless of what they do to her and her squad. Can't wait to see where this goes next. A little work on your writing would be nice, and it would be great to see how the characters develop and change. |
![]() ![]() That story was awesome please continue ! |
![]() ![]() I really liked this story, I hope you will continue with it in the sense that Zack meets with Zell in the future, and his feelings for Zell move to a different level and conflict with his feelings for max. Just what I would want to happen. LOL. PLease continue. |
![]() ![]() Good characterization, and nice use of an original character. Keep writing; I'd love to see where this goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! I love this! You must continue! I love Zell and Zephyr! I can't wait to see how they and Zack meet up later on! |
![]() ![]() I liked it :) |