Reviews for Once More
Guest chapter 5 . 2/27
Why the f would he decide to become Auror? And they can use verteiserum like that read he books they don’t even have it on them, snap head to get his personal stash for Aurora’s. Talk about warrants and trials etc etc lol your a terrible wirter
Guest chapter 5 . 2/27
Lol he has wards up that wake him only a few seconds later and then he gets caught from behind? Author fiat bs to setup drama. Such crap honestly can duel Voldemort but not some authors which were nothing but canon fodder. Shoddy writing typical you should give up forever
Lord Peverell-Potter-Black chapter 6 . 7/19/2017
Dude Awesome Story you just have to Update i wanna see this confrontation between Harry/Mark and Sarah
MikeyBlue chapter 6 . 7/26/2016
Love it will there be a chapter 7?!
kanjichibi chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
Good start for the story.
kffs chapter 6 . 4/3/2014
Super creative and interesting take on things.
Really enjoyed it.

Thanks for writing!
Annoy mouse chapter 6 . 11/7/2013
I don't suppose there is any chance of you continuing this amazing story?
a chapter 3 . 10/18/2013
Wow Harry is pathetic. He's going to get his arse handed to him by any competent death eater, nevermind fucking voldemort.

Sad thing is that's not even the worst thing about this story, that goes to the fucking singing.
Synery110 chapter 6 . 10/14/2013
I really hope you update this story... It has A LOT of potential
TulipNixphe chapter 6 . 5/17/2013
Hehe This is great!
HoosierCullen chapter 6 . 2/26/2013
Wow that was it... I am soo hoping you finish this it is soo interesting that I lost count on the chapters and was shocked when this was the last one. And it ended on a cliffhanger to boot. I think this is a great idea and an even better story. Your characters are all great even your OC characters fit perfectly. The idea of Harry going back to train and fix the world he left for the better is awsome and though done a few time I have really not read it done quite like this. The way Harry/Mark interacts with others and tries to stay aloof is really quite spot on with how I would think a Harry that had watched everyone he loved die and then decide to go back and make things better would act and react to the situation. I think he is pinning for Ginny a little too much and needs to get over her and who better than Tonks to help with that, or maybe even Amy for a while. I like that he has told Alice, Moody, Shacklbolt and Amy who he truly is that secret could have been harmful to him, now just tell Frank so he will quit treating Harry like Alice's affair. I will say again great fic and I soo hope you update and write more on it soon.
hex4292 chapter 6 . 8/29/2012
I'm guessing this is abandonned etc etc but I'm gonna say something anyway. I've come back and re-read these 6 chapters about 8 times in 3 years at this point? Amazing potential and one day I'd love to see it come back to and resurrected.
S.Peridot chapter 6 . 6/27/2012
I'v really enjoyed this fic so far.

So, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update again sometime soon.


Allons-y Lovelies chapter 6 . 6/14/2012
Ooh, awkward! Please please please update soon? This is such a good story, and I really wanna know what happens next!
GreenGrizzly chapter 6 . 5/14/2012
Its a real shame it looks like you abandoned this it was good while it lasted.
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