Reviews for Ron and Hermione:Yule Ball
Beebbop chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Great story.
Aphrodite100 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
i love this. its so sweet. rons a git, but he managed to fix it so its ok. love hermiones character. keep writing!
lulu halulu chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
I loved the ending:

“Tonight when I saw you with Krum, I wanted to go up to him and punch him right in the face and swoop you off the floor and kiss you.” He said

I looked into his eyes I saw sincerity he meant it! Krum was nice and all but I liked him as a friend

“It’s not too late.” I told him

So he swept me off my feet and kissed me on the lips ‘He truly LOVES me!’

After the kiss we sat there it felt weird something was off

I finally figured it out

“I love you too!” I said sincerely

He let out a breath he didn’t realize he was holding
JuseaPeterson chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
Well this was a different way than how I've usually read it. I like how you have it in first person. I like her thoughts. I love that you kept it in with what they said.

Great job. I like how you ended it with them figuring out how they did feel about each other.