Reviews for Master of the Zanbatous |
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![]() ![]() when over times his new master of the Zanbatous is a body huter and took out s class bad guys and women like and his had took time it the bars now reading the books of red and black of Master of the Zanbatous Naruto Namikaze swords frights and life time too, when over time his had marring ten-ten own girl blonder lee , now, and both had be into run the lost lands of whirlpool now, he had the ash body s of his clans now be put into the place now even now, it be from the top and to end now, a glass pics of past lords and lost ones too, Naruto and his wife and lover be put here and some others too, |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is something I would recommend for something who looks after a good fanfic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The writing is good the pacing is nice but let's start with the fact that using two swords is completely useless in the world of Naruto it prevents you from using ninjutsu and other techniques it's even worse for Naruto he has a lot of chakra it's a waste for him not to use it in ninjutsu where he can do much more damage and has greater flexibility and there is this thing with talking swords which is ridiculous too and the worst the romantic couple Naruto and Sakura is an aberration, so he can only achieve happiness by staying with someone who treated him like garbage and you wasted Hinata with Kiba the most useless character in the entire Naruto saga seriously that with dog breath, you could have made him stay with Tenten or Shizuka as a form of jiraia honor even if he doesn't deserve it, finally the many characters in the Naruto saga that would make a much better pair Sakura's problem is not that she is horrible or useless it's because she simply doesn't deserve Naruto, Hinata could have a better development of course qu and it could but she is by far the girl who most deserves Naruto. |
![]() ![]() interesting beginning. |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading this it was amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I got it! Jiraiya, who WAS self-confessed as being bug-shagging crazy, found Tsunade's Winnie-the-Pooh fiasco and had a couple of his clones henge into those forms for the picture and future blackmail before having them poof and getting her out. This sort of thing is likely how he got half the populace of the continent into his spying (largely on one another)... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Zabuza famously listed all the one-shot kill points in his initial confrontation with Team Seven on their way to Wave. As Hiashi did the heart-rupturing strike, I'm willing to bet that Tsunade took her chakra scalpel to the rest of those points. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you had to some thing stupid now this story is ass like really bunny ears smh |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Naruto is very large in this one... :D |
![]() ![]() why not let naruto doing a book call it the master of the twin zanbatous he made in his 3 year run the vaillge and he put on the back a old team pic 7 on it and he put into the clan big black lock room with 2 swords and his old head band and vest too, when Robert Leroy he was 13 now and rank Super JON and ex abut black ops code name fox fire ,like Naurto he too had the fox in him now , both light yang and yin into him , his get the clans 3 swords now , with the zanbatous now his more powerful and his marring to Ion 3 and his had be the fox king now, |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking incredible |
![]() ![]() ![]() huh so you can write happy endings |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gotta love the tick reference |
![]() ![]() haha holy fuck this is bad. Gave it a try, NOT worth it |
![]() ![]() The best Narusaku fanfiction I have read so far. It is a wonderful story |