Reviews for Master of the Zanbatous |
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Robert Krause chapter 4 . 8/31 sir I Robert Krause like to seeing the Master of the Zanbatous be about Naruto and Saukra had move to the lost lands of the whirlpool and his made a new village when his be the lord of it and his the spy master and Sarkua is head of the mic thing and she is co ruler with him , as for it now his mix with the fox into a new fox lord and she with him now, the 2 had the took on the fox kids a lot of fox kids and the 2 had twins boy and girl now Naruto JR and Skiler his twin sister now, the home of his mom and dad with them now, mix with the lords home now, and others parts of the house is the kids playing house and others is the fox kids home now, Naruto had helping others like Ion and her former team mates and ten-ten the last of guys team , |
Robert Krause chapter 2 . 7/28 when death mask was made of both Danzo and Sukie now and both men death mask be into a frack show for 20 years by Robert Krause Leory the last of the Leroy his clan was former be west lands and had be into the rice lands before the sound village be born , his mother and dad and 2 brothers and sisters get kill off when Robert was 8 or 9 when be ninja then a mic men and his run the body farm and his time was odd one move up the ranks it the time of the 2 3 and 4 and his out of it now run the the frank show for 20 years by his 60 years now, his gave it to Han Leroy now, his living it age 69 and his gave the money to the village school and his own book on ninjas life was like Naruto own life his dead off not yet his will saying the body of Naruto U, is to be find soon , it was now be mummy body now, with the ninja head band on it now and ninjas vest too, a green and gold book out line life into the same clan Sukie had be into only it was on the west part of the ninjas ream and his own on the clan little odd too, Naruto the 6 holke had reading it now, seeing when his clan be born form it now, seeing it was a past life too, his had the body be put into the place of felling ninjas , now, and his book be into the school now, others can reading about this men too, Konoha I Naruto reading this book as a door to the past of our informers clan bad times and seeing how his put money to helping his own clan too, do not thinking you top of it now, when Naruto step down now, the swords and book his made is put into the clan own saft now, with both head bans now, his living on seeing his clan now, to his own end too, |
Robert Krause chapter 1 . 7/28 when into time move on the 2 Zanbatous staying into the clan home now and it had get little bad now time of were wolf s and others stuff Naruto the 10 a black hire and blond hire boy now a full grown men now and his the which huther and others stuff now, his put the swords into the case now, and like Naruto SR before him was the most fire up ninja back then too, when his took out foes out now, Naruto the 10 had be call more names over time now, his made Dilve may cry co , now, were wolfs and others had not like him or love for him now, his get a were wolf armor now, war lord red and black and gold too, his be marring 2 times over one be to Ion lee and 2 is Ten -ten , his sill marring now, |
Prakith chapter 14 . 4/22 This fic is awesome! |
Robert Krause chapter 1 . 4/10 why not let Naruto had move into his mom and dad clan home for when his unpack old team pics and some others stuff his made his home now and his had sleeping for when then had eat food and had pack up for the job spy master and run the spy networking for when now, living on road is odd when unlike the toad sage had be doing it , Naruto had living off the road his camping out and meeting others it some old inn or some cub size room , when run the spy networking his more good it then others before , |
Robert k chapter 28 . 9/3/2023 when over times his new master of the Zanbatous is a body huter and took out s class bad guys and women like and his had took time it the bars now reading the books of red and black of Master of the Zanbatous Naruto Namikaze swords frights and life time too, when over time his had marring ten-ten own girl blonder lee , now, and both had be into run the lost lands of whirlpool now, he had the ash body s of his clans now be put into the place now even now, it be from the top and to end now, a glass pics of past lords and lost ones too, Naruto and his wife and lover be put here and some others too, |
EliteOtaku111 chapter 28 . 3/12/2023 This story is something I would recommend for something who looks after a good fanfic. |
alefrosier chapter 3 . 1/4/2023 The writing is good the pacing is nice but let's start with the fact that using two swords is completely useless in the world of Naruto it prevents you from using ninjutsu and other techniques it's even worse for Naruto he has a lot of chakra it's a waste for him not to use it in ninjutsu where he can do much more damage and has greater flexibility and there is this thing with talking swords which is ridiculous too and the worst the romantic couple Naruto and Sakura is an aberration, so he can only achieve happiness by staying with someone who treated him like garbage and you wasted Hinata with Kiba the most useless character in the entire Naruto saga seriously that with dog breath, you could have made him stay with Tenten or Shizuka as a form of jiraia honor even if he doesn't deserve it, finally the many characters in the Naruto saga that would make a much better pair Sakura's problem is not that she is horrible or useless it's because she simply doesn't deserve Naruto, Hinata could have a better development of course qu and it could but she is by far the girl who most deserves Naruto. |
Zeke Hooper chapter 1 . 10/11/2022 interesting beginning. |
Guest chapter 28 . 9/28/2022 I really enjoyed reading this it was amazing |
BlazeStryker chapter 18 . 8/11/2022 Okay, I got it! Jiraiya, who WAS self-confessed as being bug-shagging crazy, found Tsunade's Winnie-the-Pooh fiasco and had a couple of his clones henge into those forms for the picture and future blackmail before having them poof and getting her out. This sort of thing is likely how he got half the populace of the continent into his spying (largely on one another)... |
BlazeStryker chapter 2 . 8/11/2022 Zabuza famously listed all the one-shot kill points in his initial confrontation with Team Seven on their way to Wave. As Hiashi did the heart-rupturing strike, I'm willing to bet that Tsunade took her chakra scalpel to the rest of those points. |
kingstoniasiah chapter 13 . 8/6/2022 you had to some thing stupid now this story is ass like really bunny ears smh |
Tenkoraaa chapter 3 . 7/19/2022 I think Naruto is very large in this one... :D |
ROBERT chapter 3 . 5/26/2022 why not let naruto doing a book call it the master of the twin zanbatous he made in his 3 year run the vaillge and he put on the back a old team pic 7 on it and he put into the clan big black lock room with 2 swords and his old head band and vest too, when Robert Leroy he was 13 now and rank Super JON and ex abut black ops code name fox fire ,like Naurto he too had the fox in him now , both light yang and yin into him , his get the clans 3 swords now , with the zanbatous now his more powerful and his marring to Ion 3 and his had be the fox king now, |