Reviews for Master of the Zanbatous
robert krause chapter 2 . 6/27/2021
when saying a good bay to the men of ZANBATOUS before him and putting on the new gave now ZAN BAD was the 1 MASTER of ZANBATOUS and 7 swords men ,when then he putting on the head band on the top of the gave now and saying good bay MATSTER OF ZANBATOUS , when then he had putting on the mask of red and green mask now, he had get on the road now,
robert krause chapter 1 . 6/27/2021
when before the ZANBATOUS was his ,NAURTO had took off the black ring and long black and red cap/CLOWER off the men and he them on him now and when then the head band he had it too and he had used them it the bound huthers shop and get money too, NAURTO then put the money up for when then as for the others he had them on the wall of his dad old office wall now, when then running the spy net working now, when then he had running then get some stuff down now get to took on the workings of spying now, he get to took on side show stuff like the blood missy own evil high ranks ninjas gov men and woman like form the old woman ash rock ford a hulking woman and her evil army of goons and some time her black book on the others helping too, when the last one had be find and took out and money form the job and others had on hand was now helping too, he had money to paying for a med cave den and 2 housing bedroom too,
Tankinator175 chapter 28 . 6/25/2021
You really like the afterlife endings. I think this is the first one of yours I've read that isn't in some way sad. Actually, it is kind of sad Naruto couldn't bring Samehada and Kubikiribōchō, but it's fine. Thank you, I enjoyed it. Your afterlife scenes were pretty funny, even if I can't really see anyone seriously putting up with women that crazy. I hope you will keep writing more fanfiction sometime soon.
Username6166 chapter 16 . 4/24/2021
What was the point of all those years of training with those swords if he does absolutely nothing with them? The most he's done up to this point over halfway through the fic is kill a couple Oto-nin here or there which he could've easily done regardless.
Username6166 chapter 6 . 4/24/2021
Sannin isn't a rank, it's just a title by Hanzo the Salamander. In this fic it's the equivalent of calling Haku the Demon of the Mist because he's Zabuza's apprentice, or calling Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura the Copy-Nin. Also, you don't instantly become a sage just by being a Sannin. Jiraiya is the only sage out of the original 3. Orochimaru was never able to get a sage mode and Tsunade never bothered with senjutsu. Kabuto is more of a sage than Sakura and Anko...
robert krause chapter 28 . 4/18/2021
i Robert Krause had pic KAZUMA NAMIKA a men with big size muslces and his chest is the same as it had it too, when be a ninjas team cap and then head of the clan now , his be marring 2 one to ten-ten kid a muslces gril nick name the tank gril , and his 2 wife is ion 2 a blond hire with brown hire and she is little muslces too and her own stay home and running and ownership of the old flower shop now, when he had read on a light green black book no Naruto NAMIKAZE the master of ZANBATOUS and KAZUMA had move his clan to the west and was took on the warlords ,
Reader chapter 28 . 4/3/2021
Bravo. Nice story. Nice ending. The details were a bit lacking for my taste but still the adventure was great nonetheless. I really enjoyed this. This story left me with much more satisfied than the canon (especially with everything related to THE Uchiha Sasuke) and Boruto.
robert krause chapter 28 . 3/14/2021
MR PUDGYPUDGE sir i Robert Krause was think of the master of ZANBOTOUS as Naruto is now a big muslces men and do you seeing buke rogers when the evil one buke old foe had a body gund and if it was me i well doing it when Naruto when Naruto is warlord and then ruler of the west side and his queen co ruler is sarkura ,as for the NAMIAZE clan Naruto had find the old bank the clan owners of it and find some books under a office when the men had running , it was full of stuff the clan had money LITS and others stuff , as why i saying of him be a warlord is sill cool and good ,i was think before doing the warlord thing he had be a kaeg of the vaillge NAMIKZA no go and when ruler and be the 1 one to ruler it Naruto leader had others warlords he was working with , like his wife own long lost twin sister with the same hire and she had the south lands and ruler warlord of it , when others was foes of him had to working vs ,
robert krause chapter 4 . 3/13/2021
when Naruto and sarkura had find a way of living for a long time and when on the way both had working as bound huthers and guns fights too when Naruto and her get a mine and gold was find and used it to made a new co and when it was big time too a co town the 2 had owners of it and running it too , Naruto had a bar and some time his men had pay for it too, when Naruto had move on living a side show a evil men a out law DANNY Leroy ford a big bully and gun men for hire was kill off men and others for a long time and Naruto saw the in formers dead men gun now and he had took out the men out in cold blood and Naruto had cut off the head and put it in a big size glass jag and hot and cold rain water was put in now, as for the dead men guns Naruto had them on too, when get to going on the road now, form new York and others parts of the USA and others parts of earth Naruto side show had win more money and others times he stop in new jeast and he took out the side show for good and the men in the jag had put into a muse his wife had owner of it , the gold rode full of odd stuff too form kill off men and woman to odd stuff too like a sank sell men kit and old top hat Naruto had seeing the men before with a van like car and his pic too , it sell off the sank ole too, Naruto and sarkura had then get out of the side show now, when he tell her to keeping the muse open now, he had ask the name of side show be now into unkown he had move to some good working now, banking he had get owner ship of now,
Jondoe0321 chapter 9 . 2/24/2021
Death god stomach
Ace1190 chapter 28 . 2/9/2021
Superb story. Its hard to imagine Naruto being 6'9" though
majikss chapter 27 . 2/7/2021
naruto is definitely the bad guy in this story, the people of Oto have every reason to hate him
majikss chapter 6 . 2/6/2021
references to actual real history should be removed
KookyWacky chapter 7 . 8/28/2020
The hypocrisy of Tsunade's speech about not running away from problems
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