|Reviews for Master of the Zanbatous
| silversnitch4765 chapter 23 . 3/29/2020
That was a ridiculous fight! Naruto beat Kisangani and some of the paths of Pein in the earlier chapter and then had this much of a challenge from some nobody? That was pathetic!
| silversnitch4765 chapter 5 . 3/29/2020
Humor and romance, should be angst! Naruto is acting like Sasuke
| keller.blair1 chapter 1 . 1/28/2020
How dare you pair hinata with that dog
| robert krause chapter 11 . 12/15/2019
sir this is form Naruto fan Robert Krause ,when both Naruto and his gril had looking for some stuff on the road like 2 big bags the 2 had need for ninjas clothers and stuff and 2 bags for ninjas side stuff too , when Naruto had keep maps and when Naruto was looking for a other old men Robert Krause own of a used books shop in the lands of woods and the one time ninja and founder of ninjas clans Krause 4 , the 2 had meet up and he had help Naruto on old ninjas gave s for ex gave robbing when the money form it help Robert to get out of the evil co he had and made a books shop now , he had help Naruto out on who was sill in the co and it is boss and teams , MR Krause why get out of it , when MS it too evil for you made too foes and lost you own sol too , 2 if i was too in for money too ,but i get out when Naruto old men Minato saving me form it , 3 i like to think of paying him back for it now unlike you ninjas vaillge had doing it , ho Naruto when the fox was on the war with the vaillge i will have took you form it and had took you with me to a others earth like FF or some others too , but doing not it , sorry for it my boy , here is some men sill doing it only one is my fool little brother and sister but last time now in the west now rule as warlords now , let go with them , ok , sir i was used it form others sf shows and books too sir ,
| robert krause chapter 6 . 12/14/2019
when Naruto and Sakura had get them hands on mob money and was used it to keep the spy networking going on and when get new spy s like Jack Robertson a dock working and own of a juke ship the lights nights a ship Naruto had get saving form be took by the men one time money loner , and now it is now a spy saving home now , when going over and get to spy on a evil men and woman like Naruto and Sakura had stop out of lands of mists the rich woman mad Sammy black who made her school a hell for made kids her pawns into took out others and she was out in the west now Naruto took her out and now find money and gold and books of odd stuff too, when her clothers was to new too , when you no the run you doing not took colthers and stuff for it , when Naruto sell some books off and the clothers too , when Sakura had keep a super size dress and vast too , when the money had help out back home , when the 2 had buy out a 2 home to used like Naruto men cave and Sakura had her woman cave now , sir i Robert Krause is used some workings form men cave and others sf shows sir , i do not samping you sir i fan of Naruto and Sakura sir ,
| Pratyush chapter 1 . 10/5/2019
I like the way it started. It is very promising. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2019
You ruined a perfectly good fanficton jackass god fox ears I quit reading right the because of your dumb ass
| kekbekmekflekwek chapter 3 . 8/25/2019
This is terrible. Awful storytelling. You never once used a fucking comma anywhere near where they were needed. Characters all act like they were written by four-year-olds. Just... such a terrible fucking story. How is this garbage so high in the list?
| Kel000 chapter 10 . 7/28/2019
Story was good until you had so many people meddle into their business. Like really? Having Tsunade spy on them and bet on their relationship is just plain annoying just leave them alone. And it’s completle bullshit how naruto does not notice that he’s being followed and spied on . Sakura too. Yes they are powerful Shannon’s that can easily be spied on? It’s like their whole relationship is a joke to other . Naruto is being a big douche bag and annoying . They both like each other but naruto doesn’t act on it. You portrayed him in this story like a tsunadre or something. Sakura is being an annoying leech also . It was good at the beginning but it just went to shit later on
| Kel000 chapter 7 . 7/28/2019
Stop adding these heaven scenes it’s just weird . Jiraiya and Kushina ? It’s like you’re having him NTR Minato ... why did she come out with a towel and say “I’m not good enough for you to peek on?” Like yikes
| Kel000 chapter 5 . 7/28/2019
Yes naruto did all this training just so he could demonstrate to a bunch of kids ... and last chapter you hinted something about him training a new group of swordsman with HISSSSS style. Really hope you don’t do that would be really annoying for naruto who spent years training with heavy ass swords just so he could come back to Konoha and demonstrate his style to little kids and train people ? Just bullshit
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/25/2019
a paperclip weighs less than a feather.
| Vyas chapter 13 . 6/27/2019
Why Fox ears...
| Kappaccino chapter 28 . 6/24/2019
Much Master, very Zanbatous.
| KristinalUzumakiPrime23 chapter 28 . 5/31/2019
also to use a star wars philosophy: hate leads to anger, anger leads to pain, pain leads to suffering, that is the path to the dark side.