Reviews for Master of the Zanbatous
Guest chapter 18 . 12/2/2017
I've read this story so many times, all of your stories in fact, but this one is my favorite. And my favorite part of my favorite story, is the end if this chapter, and Jiraiya's reaction. I laugh every time i read "FUCK ALL YOU NON-BELIEVERS!" and then I die at "HIGH FIVES FOR EVERYONE!
You sir have a gift, and I thank you for sharing it
1andonlyjack chapter 28 . 11/12/2017
Great story
SixStringBass chapter 21 . 11/2/2017
tenshiakuma14 chapter 1 . 10/8/2017
Very awesome
Anaea chapter 5 . 7/26/2017
Too rushed, not enough elaboration. Needs revision. A good beta could help make this into a truly good story. But both the method and delivery need work.
Ezzie Valentine chapter 21 . 5/6/2017
SPOON! I love this story so much! I would leave a long review now, but not easy on this device. expect one though!
YeagerMeister31 chapter 28 . 3/24/2017
man this was a great story just love NaruSaku and sure was intense in moments but overly hilarious great job
YeagerMeister31 chapter 27 . 3/24/2017
well this sure was interesting finally Hokage hope kids come soon maybe they were conceived on that desk lol like father like son lol
YeagerMeister31 chapter 26 . 3/24/2017
well this sure was unexpected can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 25 . 3/24/2017
man this was quite entertaining
YeagerMeister31 chapter 24 . 3/23/2017
well this sure was interesting is Sakura Bi i don't know still it was kinky
YeagerMeister31 chapter 23 . 3/23/2017
man that sure was interesting chapter and the ending was intriguing
YeagerMeister31 chapter 22 . 3/23/2017
well that sure was entertaining now this Kurosuke is going to die should be a blast pun intended
YeagerMeister31 chapter 21 . 3/23/2017
man this is so funny sad it won't be NaruSakuIno but oh well
YeagerMeister31 chapter 20 . 3/23/2017
well this sure was interesting loved Naruto's mind games
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