Reviews for Karma, Bad Karma
Cutter12 chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I liked how you were able to believably get under that granite facade that seems to always surround Ian and help to make him a bit more human. Interesting story.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Brilliant
FairCritic chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
I think you really captured Ian's nature here. Very good. You should write a story about Ian and Laura's relationship from begginning to this fic.
ALEO chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
Edgerton has such strong control to be able to calm and steady himself and take such a difficult shot to save someone so close to him. You have managed to create a whole relationship in a short action based piece. Nicely done.
Magister Equitum chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
You did a good job of going through Ian's thought process. The fact that the was shaking. The denial he tried to bring up, saying that he just didn't shake; not ever. The karma theme was a nice underlying symbol. The creation of Laura makes Ian a human, something that we don't see very often on the show. But you made their relationship one that was built on competition, which stays true to Ian's character and hers that you created. All in all, a great job.