|Reviews for The sealing|
| quote-the-inevitable chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
aww that is soo sweet
| TwilightandCanadaforever chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
| What a troubled life chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Please tell me that was not the end. You really should continue with this story line.
| White Sakura of Hope chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
That was sweet, but you need to work on your spelling and word useage. For example, towards the end when Yuki was drinking Kaname's blood, it's "thick as honey" not "think as honey". There were MANY MANY mistakes. They ruin the mood of your story. There were also grammatic mistakes. It should be "bow to him and me" instead of "bow to him and I." You should get a Beta reader to check first before posting up your work. The characters are o.k. Though they were a bit OOC, they weren't crazily off.
I think you should consider revising it.