Reviews for The Next Step
lalala777 chapter 3 . 11/27/2009
aw it wasnt horrid... it was awesome! i 3 Pellinor!
The Weatherwitch chapter 3 . 11/21/2008
aw that was cute! hehehe its a shame they didn't marry in the book...oh well
LadyZee86 chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
I realy liked this :D
Midnight's Queen chapter 3 . 4/12/2008
It was really good... I don't know how people like you always seem to be thinking up great stories, and when I try, nothing good comes! I loved it.
Kuroi Garyuu chapter 3 . 1/4/2008
This was so sweet! But, it's so hard to picture Cadvan like this. *shrug* I can't picture him getting married and being that sentimental no matter how much I wish for it. It may just be me, though. Anyway, great job!
sanctuary-in-dreams chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
brilliant job, as per usuall. were do you get this talen? *begins to search fervently for the "talent" but fails, yelling, I shall get you next time, sly Talent!*

ahum. anyways good job
Fallen-Petals15 chapter 3 . 12/16/2007
WOW! Nothing bad can be said I love it its so sweet
Manawydan chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
OMG that was great you expressed her feelings really well

ooh that was SO sweet your making me believe thats whats going to happen in the singing :):D:)
GingerBookworm chapter 3 . 11/28/2007
sob... it was beautiful it made me cry
Icelands chapter 3 . 11/27/2007
The ending was good and realistic. I wouldn't have thought of her being startled by finding him in bed with her- nice job with that!

I would write a marriage fic, but I think it'd be rather contrived since I'm quite a LONG ways away from marrying.

Icelands chapter 2 . 11/27/2007
It was beautiful; I didn't realize there were multiple chapters!

One thing: " winked solemnly" is a bit of an oxymoron. :)

Keep writing!
Icelands chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
Maerad and Silvia were very in-character. Well done!

xLaramiex chapter 3 . 11/26/2007
*sniff* why are you so good at making me cry? :,) chapter 2 especially was...EH! (that means I'm very excited ;) )that was amazing!