InsaneGrizzlies chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
Hmm...this is intersting. mupdate soon!
29Isabella chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
really good... just one thing...

Emmett couldn't control herself.

yea... himself... but i like it! :)
29Isabella chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Wow, this is funny...i like it... lol
Xo.Simply.Jasmine.oX chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
aww I uv it! continue soon else...*evil glare*
smartblond1064 chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
aww sounds like true love!
Beautifulgoodbye3 chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
Nice ... can't wait for more.
c4ny0u533m3 chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
Ok you have to write more because this story rox my sox off.

e-mail me when the 3rd chap is up.

I think Alice should go over to Bella's house with a Alice outfit because she found out about 'the date' Bella willingly accepts and Edward falls in love with her, and Bella loves him.

But it's your FF. Plz consider this. keep writing

c4ny0u533m3 chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
do watch Ugly Betty?

Anyway this is so good it reminds of Lily and James from Harry Potter and I love it since they're supposed to be 'soul mates'


Mcaz chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
haha well well well this should be interesting ]
School Librarian chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
Love it! Bella is an academic snob and Edward's a typical jock. It'll be interesting to see two polar opposites become attracted to one another.
twilightlover16 chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
really good chapter
BookLover1778 chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
i really love it. its great how you can see the diference between how bella sees the day and how edward sees it! i can't wait to read more! please update soon!
lilyProngs9499 chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
i love it!

please write the next one in both pov (bella and edwards)

u r an amazing author
koLORgOtH chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
luver of darkness chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
cool please add more to this story
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