really good... just one thing...

Emmett couldn't control herself.

yea... himself... but i like it! :)

Wow, this is funny...i like it... lol

aww I uv it! continue soon else...*evil glare*

aww sounds like true love!

Nice ... can't wait for more.

Ok you have to write more because this story rox my sox off.

e-mail me when the 3rd chap is up.

I think Alice should go over to Bella's house with a Alice outfit because she found out about 'the date' Bella willingly accepts and Edward falls in love with her, and Bella loves him.

But it's your FF. Plz consider this. keep writing

~dreama

do watch Ugly Betty?

Anyway this is so good it reminds of Lily and James from Harry Potter and I love it since they're supposed to be 'soul mates'

LOL

~dreama

haha well well well this should be interesting ]

Love it! Bella is an academic snob and Edward's a typical jock. It'll be interesting to see two polar opposites become attracted to one another.

really good chapter

i really love it. its great how you can see the diference between how bella sees the day and how edward sees it! i can't wait to read more! please update soon!

i love it!

please write the next one in both pov (bella and edwards)

u r an amazing author

KILLER!

cool please add more to this story

great chapter.

fighting...[;

theres gonna be some tension between them later.. i can feel it now [;

update soon!