I absolutely loved every word thank you for sharing

I really enjoyed reading this and am glad you continued it

How sad that neither of her parents will attend

What a wonderful idea to have a letter from Edward’s father!

Great start for your first story! Cant wait to read more!

Thanks for writing this wonderful story

I don’t know if you warned it at he beginning, or not… but this was beautiful! I’m literally crying with Edward’s dad’s letter!

I can't go on reading this as it's a really childish. Perhaps it was written by a child and it's meant for children to read and relate?

So Bella is a pig? On her wedding day she eats breakfast then Alice and Rosalie wash her hair in a big sink, style it, get her dressed yet Bella doesn't bother to shower on her wedding day? Euk lol.
I hope she showers before getting laid, if not then poor Edward!

He might not hear her thoughts and let's assume she could stay completely still and quiet in the bathtub but... what about her heartbeat (especially with E being so in tune with it) and vampires seeing clearly in the dark? :)
There's a lot of privacy in that vampire house compared to the canon.
E seems to relay more on what they say than what they think. I guess it is difficult to write around their gifts :)

I enjoyed this; a slightly different interpretation!

bella needs to grow up and let her childish parents go. if they are so against her marriage to edward they don't care much about her happiness. especially after all she's done for both of them. i mean she's been living with charlie for what, two years? what has he done besides allow her to live there, and cook and clean for him? did he give her an allowance? buy her a decent car? no! he bought her a beat up old truck to make his friend happy and give him more money for beer. and that's another thing. if charlie was so happy with bella coming to live with him, why did he still drink all the time? nothing ever happened in forks until the nomads showed up! and renee, don't get me started on her. what a bitch! it's all right for her to run and discard her marriage because she was bored, but she won't allow bella to make a life for herself? what is wrong with her? did she even come to bella's graduation or did phil take priority?

charlie has spent way to much time on the rez listening to billy's hatred and jacob's whining. no wonder renee left him!

edward's such a worry wart, i probably would have hit him!

Nevermind. It was just explained. Lol