Reviews for The Destiny Unfolded
Clovergirl100 chapter 3 . 4/15/2013
who the hell is scarelt do u mean kurina if not please tell whats going on with that

beside that i really enjoyed reading that. this chapter is mysterous and even though i am rereading this it still makes me excited

can't wait to read the chapTer
its exam week and each oF ur chaPters ate treats when i study soo i will be back and cOntinue ur awsOme woRk!3
Mordred Saber chapter 16 . 10/3/2012
Ker... ahem Ushinaware-chan! :P
Here goes me babbling over things which most probably don't count as review"

I've spent half of my reviews telling about your awesome grip to the plot and ability to maintain the flow to keep the readers engaged, so I won't be going in to that. Anyways, the title of the chapter reminded me of my all time favorite Air Gear... and few lines below was my favorite line of the chapter "When two restless creatures clash, there cannot be any harmony…"

Sugoi ne *_*

Kalarippayattu? *embarrassed grin* this is the first time I'm hearing about it. You have done your research well. In which part of India was it originated? Also, the description of shrine was well-written, appreciate your effort on the same. It would have been annoying if we had some half-baked description to read!
The ending was left as a mystery, no surprises there... though as a reader I would request for longer and/or frequent updates despite knowing your commitments to real world (selfish much?).
By the way, I had to scan through the previous chapter before starting this one. It would be awesome if you could provide a summary of the previous chapter and a teaser of the up-coming chapter as well (onegai :P) .

Anyways, time to keep aside the laptop and look forward to some watery curry being cooked downstairs -_-" keep up the good work.

xoxo Youkai.
ricagrace19 chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
hello..) Suryasree I like your story..no... I love it sooo much.. please continue TDU.. please update alrealdy I'm craving for the next chapter to come.. I am encouranging you to continue this story.. please..This is really good.. the flow of the story is written very well and the characters are not out of character.. I will wait for the next chapter I'm hoping that you will finish this and please do not abandon this fic.. God bless)
Legacy chapter 15 . 1/20/2012
Dude! Continue and update it already!

this is like the second season of flame of recca!

Hurry i'm eager to read further plus i'm pretty impatient!
Clovergirl100 chapter 15 . 11/27/2011
How did Tokiya question the girl when he could not see or hear her. I think you made bobo.

I still love you, I know why they want the healing girl , but what are they going to with her because they first need Fuuko to break it. ... I wonder what fuuko will do when she finds out her brother and father are still alive . And will she have to kill them because their being control by her god father that wants to kill her best friend Recca.. I hope it does not come to that
Clovergirl100 chapter 13 . 11/27/2011
Fuuko kissed Tokiya ... Is that a good thing?

Well ?

Dramic chapter ! Can't wsit to see what you have in store for us
Clovergirl100 chapter 9 . 11/27/2011
When Tokiya and Domon was in the flower shop you double or wrote alot of that part twice . Just letting you know.

I thought Tokiya and his sister scene was very cute
Clovergirl100 chapter 7 . 11/27/2011
Well the whole gang is at recca house well let's found out what happens.

By the way how is Kaganai other name is pronounce because I have no idea? O well I will just uses is another name instead
Clovergirl100 chapter 5 . 11/26/2011
I wonder what is inside the brown paper bag that Tokiya made sure that did not get damAge in the fight. ? Well I am going to keep reading so I can find out
Clovergirl100 chapter 5 . 11/26/2011
I wonder what is inside the brown paper bag that Tokiya made sure that did not get damAge in the fight. ? Well I am going to keep reading so I can find out
Clovergirl100 chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Who scarlet? Do you mean Kuriena ...

That was such an awesome scene with Fuuko and Raiha . Well we know Raiha likes Fuuko or why would he do so much for her if he did . Well the question is does Fuuko feel the same way
xiatien chapter 15 . 11/20/2011
Yeah you updatedD SOOOOOO happy ok I give guess I have to update as well a deals a deal hmmm but I am in the midst of writing my hxh fanfic buuuut wait for it tom ok I'll do my best love how the story is going and I REAALLY like the antagonist D *GRINS* it makes him more human somehow thanks for the shout out D tc
rheiann09 chapter 15 . 11/20/2011
nice chapter. :) im very excited what will happen in the shrine. haha. is there a even a chance of a slight kurei/fuuko pairing? though it was originally ToFuu? :D
xiatien chapter 14 . 11/16/2011
*SCREAMING* UPDATE x Infinity D I have been meaning to tell you that but my mobile is going insane on me I cannot post a review so now better late than never D
Clovergirl100 chapter 14 . 9/8/2011
I like how this a tofu that not going to fast . ... Their slowly respecting each and have very cute moment a lot fanfiction make their relationship go to fast and take all the focus off the plot or battle

You have their moment but you focus more on the point which I love ...because their relationship is more of a sidestory

Can't wait for next chapter soooo post it soon and j sm still wonder shat Tokiya was out a night when he save fuuko I still really want to find out,,,,

I wonder what the ninija's face look like when they find out fuuko is travel with kurei or what they will do and the water dragon!

Just talking about it is making me excited so hurrrrrry! I want to know what happens next
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