Reviews for Patience |
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![]() ![]() ![]() My God! This has to be my most favourite piece ever! I am appalled this is so damn so good! Full 101/100 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story with john seeing it from greg and james and the way they cared for each other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I like this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this piece. Excellent Story. Loved the John House interior monologues. Mokm |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. That was great reading - well written, an interesting subject. Loved the ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha. Loved it. Fabulous job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the great story! It's nice to learn a bit more about House & his Father. Very much in character. I like to think that Wilson is one of the very few people allowed into the circle of House's family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You had a few really striking spots in here. Blythe didn't even flinch. "I know James," she replied firmly. "I know he would never leave you." She waited and when the anger flowed from his body, she stepped forward and pulled him into a hug. "He promised me," she whispered. "And now I'm promising you." It felt as though he were intruding, spying on Wilson while he was asleep. But Wilson wasn't asleep; he was unconscious, because he had protected John's son. John believed in loyalty, and he believed in protecting one's own. Wilson was one of his now. Greg took the syringe from the nurse and pushed it into the central line. "I'm fine." He watched Wilson slowly relax. "And if you ever do something like that again, I'll kill you myself, you stupid son-of-a-bitch." These three were really powerful lines. Otherwise though, I enjoyed it immensely, you have a knack for being sentimental with out being corny, which is nice. :) Very enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice character piece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was excellent, really well done. For once, I actually liked John, and I totally wasnt expecting that. I loved the last bit, it really made me smile. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was such a good fic, it was unique involving House's dad and I really think you did great job on everything. -Miyth |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it. You should do a sequel. I love how the first thing Wilson says when waking up is 'House'. So sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure if that was supposed to be as adorable as it was, but it was wonderful! Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay, can I assume that Wilson threw himself in front of a moving car or took a bullet for House? this has definite potential. I hope it's not over. |