|Reviews for Three rules|
| ThoughtsLightAndFireAndSound chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
haha that was a funny one :D
i do think raven's part felt a tad rushed as compared to bb's, and the ' instead of '' for the speeches were kinda confusing cuz at first i thought they were thoughts...so it bugged me throughout the fic
regardless, this is still pretty good
the premise is great! nice piece
| Imnotablackchicka-Imjustachick chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Two Rules: when someone is speaking its "this" not 'this'
next rule: when a new person is speaking, make a new paragraph, don't mash it all together... good story otherwise
| BG-13 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
I dont wanna know. I really dont.
| HunnyABee chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Hilarious. Beautiful. I laughed out loud, or, if not, snickered at least.
| Nacho cheese001 chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
You got to admit, BB's got style.
Great exit by the way.
| Animegod 197 chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Very funny! I really like it!
| Not G. Ivingname chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
I forgot to ask, what were they doing, fighting, lemon, or abit of both? write what they did that night...
| Not G. Ivingname chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
I thought it was the THREE rules of combat, not the TWO, good story though
| reader chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
funny. needs more though
| XxNightfirexX chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
A scream rang through the tower, then all that could be heard was ‘Help me. Help me. Help me…’ as the monkey went on, until about half a hour later when Robin got up and smashed it.
That was a very nice addition, and I loved the rules, especially number three. So Beast Boy.
| Moondragonheart chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
...Wow. That's really original, using training and all. Good job. -
| Qwertymann chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
An interesting story. I enjoyed how you portrayed Beast Boy as a good fighter and his rules for fighting were good. Although this is a nice story, you have some problems with grammar and word structure. Here's some pointers for better grammar.
When someone talks, don't use single quotes. Use double quotes "like this".
When people are talking, start a new paragraph each time a person says something.
Avoid using nicknames anywhere other than dialogue.
Other than that, this is a very solid story and very good. I rate it 8/10
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Very good one! Great job with BB; he's smarter than people give him credit for.
Keep the good writing.
| bbissocute chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
That was immensely cute. I love it. Very nice. Keep it up!
| Diabeticxonxmeds chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Good story...I like the three rules BB uses to kiss Raven. Real cute! -