Reviews for Turtle Soup
tmntlover2013 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Great job on the story I liked it alot.
mtmnt chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
I've read this story so often now, I decided to review

I. Love. THIS! The image of Donny being...ah, well, cooked?, was disturbing, but in a GOOD way! Call me sick, but I can't help but like stories where Donny's...uh...tortured?(when there's a bro to comfort him, of course. I'm creeped out of myself, for Donny's my favorite, but, hey, everyone's weird inside)

Anyway, I love your writing style and this story is very well thougt through, I really, really like the topic(and the fluff)

Keep up such great work!
Tori-chan chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
Brr. Just the thought of them being eaten... nope, not good. *shivers again*

Very well written, just like all your work, and I was both scared and disgusted at the beginning.

Though I wish you could write some more Donnie, since he is my favourite, but the way you write the others... it's almost so that they, too, become my favourites :3
thehappystalkerball chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Wow, that was really good! Poor Don! That would be so scary and freaky and that is really twisted. I'm glad his brothers came through, ugh, that would be awful! It was written well- I could see all of it play out in my head perfectly.
T420000 chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
wow so intense but i loved it. i kind of wish there was more to this story though.
Rachel McN chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
...How could you DO that to Don! You really had me worried, I thought noone was going to come for him.
Aeryn Lavanthia chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
This story messes with my head in all the right ways. One minute I'm grinning and the next my skin is crawling. Bravo!
Amethyst Asheryn chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Hey, not bad. Freaking sadists - *shudder* the first part freaked me out. I could just imagine.

"I don't care if this was just cosmic bad luck, Leo, they tried to eat me." - I'm sorry to say this made me laugh. Haha. Then I went right back to feeling sorry for him though.

"Raphael broke something else while Mike was trying to call. And then I was going to tell one of them to get you anyway 'cause I think I crushed something in the shellcell." - Haha. D: Well, Donatello has good luck, I guess.

Good job.

Ryan Phelan chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
When reading this story the movie "Heathers" came to mind. This fanfic is one of a kind. It's going onto my favorites list.
dearjoan chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Oh, wow! Poor Donatello! That really is a horrifying image! The description was so involved too. Great job!
Tatsumaki-sama chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
It made me sick that Shedder was really intending to boil poor Donatello. As they added the vegetables, the horror of it really sank in. But I'm really glad that the other turtles came to rescue, especially Leo who comforted Don after all that physical and psychological torture. Yay for Leo and Donnie bonding moments!
Daiyu Amaya chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
I'm ashamed to say I thought it was funny that the foot was going to eat him... BUt I liked the style you use to write.
nikcik chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Wow. It was really... moving.

When I saw the title I thought it just must be funny after all :) But a funny idea taken so serious, man that's scary. I love the fic, the idea is brilliant and your writing skills are just as good :)

Thanks for a great story, you got me thinking about it all day :)
Turtle Wax chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
Oh wow, great story! Poor Donny...Turtle Soup indeed! Hehe!
Rachel chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Whoa, turtle soup for real! Crazy scary! Though I wish we got to see how Shredder came up with that idea, lol. I love the end scenes, though, especially Leo holding Don's hand...a very simple moment, but really clear imagery.
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