|Reviews for Fade To Black|
| Alison M. DOBELL chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
I liked the little bit of introspection on Ronan's part but killing John off sucks. Far more interesting to have another chapter with Carson or whoever bringing him back then having more unfolding about the relationship between Ronan and John and what they mean to each other. Just a short sharp death scene feels like a cop out and I really don't like the idea of Ronan feeling he will have no reason to go on living without his friend. Have to stop now, this review is almost longer than your fic! Ali D :~)
SHEPPARD: "We can name it later!"
| Mad Mistress of Death chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Short, but good. I think this could make a great story about what Ronon and the rest of the team would do if John died, and how each would react to the other's choices. Hope you do expand this!