|Reviews for Hatsukoi|
| Ebony-Roza-Black chapter 1 . 7/29
I absolutely love this story. Are you going to continue this story or is it just a one-shot type story?
| goofysdisciple chapter 1 . 7/3
Quick question: Was this written before Naruto's parents names where revealed? The remaining of the Yondaime struck me as really odd and other than not knowing his real name and coming up with one for this it serves no purpose.
| Espied7 chapter 1 . 4/10
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/24
| Anime Princess chapter 1 . 1/24
So, she really was the granddaughter of Sarutobi?! AWESOME! And did Konohamaru, Asuma, and Kurenai know this? They must have! Right? At some point...
| TheBeauty chapter 1 . 1/9
Wonderful story :)
| Grace chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
Kwaii :D i have read this story over and over i totally love the concept can you write a neji fem naru i'll totally appericate it
| Bella216 chapter 1 . 10/2/2015
Oooh! Sasuke, get it! lol that ending had me chortling like a maniac. Thanks so much for posting this story!
| Sakihinata chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
very nice i like how u put in sasuke this gentlenan badass sasuke very impressiv pls more
| Otaku Of Great Britain chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
OMG! THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I LOVE IT! I was reading it till like 1 am. Lol
CrazyGirlLucy xx :3
| Mrs. Bunny chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
This is well written, but the characterization is off. It would be fine if Noriko was an OC, but she's not. I just didn't see almost any of Naruto's personality traits in her.
Sasuke's characterization is also off. He would give up his rivalry with Naruto/Noriko just because he doesn't want to be enemies. That's not how ninja work.
The line, "it's a man thing" is also strange. Noriko spent the majority of her life as a man, wouldn't she automatically understand what the "man thing" is?
All of this would fit together much better if Noriko was an OC.
| kris937 chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
aww that was so cute.
| Reinaa-chan chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
just loved the possessive sasuke!
| Candy chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
This is pretty disturbing. Sasuke just forced her body to change without her consent while she was still recovering from a mission. He's really creepy and controlling. I could not get past that action because it pretty much shows that he has his own opinion of what Naruto needs and doesn't really care about Naruto's concerns.