Reviews for The Beginning: Alternate Story
snowchesse chapter 8 . 11/3/2013
Barbara is going to end up with robin or what?
I'm going to follow(this might change) and not favoriting it.
Kayve1212 chapter 8 . 7/28/2012
This is a really a amazing story. continue.
pendyfreak863810 chapter 8 . 12/4/2011
i really love the story
coolcari chapter 8 . 1/16/2009
come on continue writing the story!
Jokermanxanimefan-writer chapter 7 . 7/30/2008
cool! Thanx for updating. Interesting story you gots there!
kobez2.0 chapter 2 . 4/12/2008
The throttle on most bikes and sport bikes are either thumb control, or used by twisting the handle bar.
kobez2.0 chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
I feel I should point out that wearing all black while attempting to hide in darkness is ill-advised, unless the darkness were complete, but then it wouldn't matter what you were wearing. My point is that darker colors are harder to spot in darkness than Black... you know.. not that I'm good at hiding in the night or anything...*cough*
Jokermanxanimefan-writer chapter 4 . 4/6/2008
Awsomw stoty!, But you should really reread your work! I saw a a lot of tiny, but important mistakes! Well continue with your great story!