|Reviews for Chocolate Covered Love|
| crosslight chapter 15 . 9/2/2013
...five years since update.
This is really funny. I love Lily's voice, she sounds so brilliantly teenagery. James is also fantastic, he's really in character. You should really continue this.
| penleaf chapter 5 . 8/14/2013
AHAHAHA! this story never gets old-especially the chapters I Plead Innocent, The SevenYears Butt War, and Right Place, Wrong Time. HILARIOUS!
| I feel so freaking dizzy and i wanna puke Sorrraaay chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
Im really sorry i can't read this fic, its so rushed that I feel dizzy.
| penleaf chapter 15 . 8/8/2013
AUGHH! this is the best story EVER, tears of laughter are still rolling down my face. KEEP UPDATING!
| Whiskers chapter 7 . 7/20/2013
| Whiskers chapter 7 . 7/20/2013
Okay I seriously am tired of this Mina, and if Sirius starts to like her then I am going to kill him too! I seriously HATE Mina sooo much!
She has nothing likable about her, and to make this a more useful review and not just complaints, here's why I can't stand her:
First she's a ball of Angry fire and impulse all the time that it got old pretty fast and it's not even funny.
Second you introduced her to us in that negative way, without a past to her that makes us know the good side of her or even just make her do an endearing action that will make us fall for her, if you're gonna put a character like that you would want to give her charm instead of making her come across as simply obnoxious.
She's so controlling and thinks she has the right to do anything, imagine meeting someone like that for the first time and that person humiliated your beloved best friend and on top of that your best friend fell for that person!
That how It is for us readers, Sirius is our best friend who we love so much from the books, we don't want to see an obnoxious stranger (Mina) humiliating him!
So that's my review for this chapter, please take it as constructive criticism and not offensive criticism because in fact I love your way of writing from Emily's point of view, it cracks me up! Also you have a talent for gripping the reader from the first chapter which not a lot of writers can do.
I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
| Whiskers chapter 6 . 7/20/2013
I don't like Mina, who does she think she is to destroy the common room like that, also she humiliated Sirius and he is supposed to be more capable than that...
Other than these annoying things, Lily's brain
Is quite hilarious, really entertaining!
| icecatfire chapter 15 . 6/22/2013
please don't stop i neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed to see what happens next!...i also thought it was hilarious that sirius gave james away...cruel but hilarious. XD
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/15/2013
This is one of the funniest things I have ever read. Siriusly. (Like my pun?;)) please continue it literally makes me laugh out loud:P please I will love you forever if you keep going !
| nancy.armani.7 chapter 15 . 4/6/2013
I like it it's quite interesting and really funny two :)
| ThePerfectMess chapter 15 . 4/18/2012
So hilarious and cute! It really makes me sad that you haven't completed it, I hope you come back to this story some day. :)
| Dw31 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Hahaha love your writing! I laughed so hard i fell out of my bed! Please update soon!
| ChocolateBeth chapter 15 . 12/4/2011
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! EPIC STORY! Sooooo funny I had to try soooo hard not to howl with laughter cuz I'd wake up my family, but it didn't go too well and several snorts escaped me. Haha. Siriusly (I know that's not funny anymore) though, this fic is EPICALLY INSANELY FANTASTICALLY AWESOME and I would LOOOVE it if you could update it just a teeny bit... Okay, more than a teeny bit, but I understand if you're busy... PLEEEEAAAASE! I FREAKIN ADORE YOUR STORY!
Love the more-than-slightly insane Beth xxx XD
| IHaveAWandIJustCan'tShowYou chapter 15 . 11/13/2011
Oh my Dumbledore :')
I only started reading your fics yesterday and I'm hooked! They're hilarious and amazing, and they've made ne laugh even though I'm ill and stuck in bed :')
Thank you for being such a greatly fantastical writer :D
Update soon! :D
| jeanpaulandsophieranier chapter 15 . 10/9/2011
Even though its been a year since you last update I will put this on story alert an dope you update! Just remember that you have a reader out there who absolutely loves your work!