Reviews for Demons
xXxAshannahxXx chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
Dude! This is such a good story! It does have a few grammarical errors, but it could be worse. I really like this twists in it. Although I think it's kind of mean to leave us on the edge of a cliffhanger like that... But it's still superb. As for where this should go...hmmm. Maybe Amane could show up in one of his dreams. But that would be a little cliche. Maybe his mom? And after they appear, he starts hearing little snippits of what people are saying to him... I don't know. It's just an idea. I can't wait to read more of this story; I love it. Keep it up!
DistanceBetween chapter 12 . 2/6/2010
Wow, this is pretty cool! I hope you continue soon!
Xx BleedingxRainbowz xX chapter 12 . 1/2/2010
AWWSOME
Xx BleedingxRainbowz xX chapter 3 . 1/2/2010
this is awsome so far cant wait too read the rest!
InjusticeLeague chapter 12 . 10/25/2009
Yes, you are indeed.
hombaroo225 chapter 12 . 10/22/2009
You are evil. You are. WHY THE CLIFFHANGERS! WHY! Bloody brilliant story, dear. Update soon!
subaru1999 chapter 12 . 10/21/2009
ah poor ryou! this is a great story, i cant wait to see what happens next!
evanlgiene the dark vampire chapter 10 . 7/27/2009
its very good that ryous fatheer is in the story now
Tap Dancin On A Land Mine chapter 10 . 7/7/2009
I really like this story so far! We aren' given much as far as Ryo's relationship with his father, so fanfic authors have a lot of poetic liscence there. And I think you've captured i beautifully. I also love Ryo's opinion of the soup; I feel much the same way about soup myself. All in all, this is a wonderful story so far and I can hardly wait for your next update!

-Roxy
believe chapter 10 . 6/22/2009
This is an amazing story.I appreciate your take on the subject very much.
Lone warrior of egypt chapter 9 . 3/15/2009
I love your it please write more
PianoKeys4 chapter 7 . 2/15/2009
Love the poem! Ryou swears! You don't like Anzu! Great chapter!
RAB chapter 8 . 12/21/2008
Interesting story, although I haven't seen or read Yu-Gi-Oh.

Keep the good work up!

There are some misspellings in the previous chapters, for example 'sign' - 'sigh'.
Strange Liou chapter 7 . 6/18/2008
This is so sad *sniffle*

I can't say i support the idea of sending him to a mental hospital, I just don't trust them. I mean, how can you cure someone when you put them in such awful alien situation? I'd say it drives them into further insanity and if they see improvement its only due to constant monitoring. But I'm not expert and I've never been in one, so I don't know. I see it as only a short term solution, unless they lock him up for life, but I think thats only a way of getting rid of the problem (Ryou) instead of fixing it.

Anyway, this is very serious. I really don't know if Ryou can dig himself out of that hole (though I hope he can!), or if his friends can (though they've already given up). I think he made a great step in telling Yugi what happened though! Sure, he'll feel bad about it, I always do when I admit something or say something close to my heart, but you get over it. I've never had that happen to me (thank God), but I have tried to make some research into the reactions of underage rape victims and I haven't found any good analysis, so I really know nothing. That man really angered me, I mean what the fuck? How can you DO THAT? He destroyed ryou and then throws him some coins as if that's gonna make it all better! Fuck, I wanna kill him *seethes*

In conclusion, it is a very nice story, very emotional and has touched me in a way. I hope you find Ryou a happy ending, and if not, I hope he goes to a better place, maybe that angel could take him away, somewhere where the demons can no longer reach him *smiles sadly*
Author's Account Deleted chapter 7 . 6/15/2008
I love this chapter! Please update again soon!

And as far as the Anzu thing goes... I definitely agree with you about not having her in the fic... I think she's irritating :) I hope you get so many reviews that you HAVE to update really soon lol!
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