Reviews for Forgotten Hope
person chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
wow...but it felt kinda werid, cause it began with soething loving, i alomst thought it was a love poem and then...war, so ..

but good job...i like your poems
AnnieNonmouse chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
so...sad...ah!

oh my goodness this was sad, it's the kinda stuff i write and my mom sent me to a counceler(sp?) about! it's so good!
cast14 chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Great poem i loved it i hope you will write other poems they will be very interesting
maryzhang chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
is the _ _ _ ...Gil? cause that would be really mean to him. shame on you, lavina. you know that he likes Chocolates too.

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wtf. nvm. no damn bastard waves Chocolates in front of my face and then eats it!

I'm gonna kill him.
Maria-Lilly Kon chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
Poor Sasuke. All your poems about him are filled with sorrow... but I suppose that is what will became of him in the end. Great Job. **Snatches chocolate away from _ _ _ and gives it to Mary**

LOL, hope you're happy now!

Lavina